Great chapter, keep it coming.
Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Random Reviewer (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Jun 2014
Wow! Really good fic. I died laughing when I read the part about koga nerly soiling himself. Although after that you could hear a cricket in the background while everyone stared at me for laughin , in their opinion, randomly. Anyway, hope you continue this fic.
(Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Jun 2014
I think i will add humor as a genre. They are in the age range of 16 to 17 years old although I'm leaning more towards them being seventeen years old rather than 16.
* drying away tears of laughing*
Its really funny, I think you should add comedy to the genre haha. Just for curiocity what are their ages ?
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