Great chapters, keep it coming.
This new development is exciting!! I wonder what she's going to discover now...secrets, mysteries, Sesshomaru trapped inside a magic lamp. Just kidding about the last one. XD
I love your choice of words and flowing metaphors!!
Looking forward to more! :)
P.S. Wonderful use of the prompts!
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
I sense some dramatic intrque or a shift in the story coming up!
i know those feels, kags.
I adore when Hojo is not made into a jealous bad guy. He never was, and people aren't so black and white. However, he is unshakably noble, and I like that you have him like this here.
good word choices in this one!
It is!!! And the visuals are amazing. This is not good times for Kagome
.... Oh what!? Is it who I think it is???
This is dark and vicious and I love it.
Oh, what!? That's sounds like how the well takes her, but instead of cushioning blue light, it is darkness! Love it!
I like the tone of this. She is disconnected from the world, but it is written in present tense. Like, it is her otherwordly visions that are keeping her anchored.
Ojii-san is perfect!!! And so is Kagome's heart. She would do something like that regardless of who could see or what they would think at the time
Well... THAT is not going to help her mood any lol. Little brothers...
I love the ominous Wisp character
So the slightly touched in the head knight enters. Lol I'm sorry, but I can't see Hojo as 'sane' either.
Looking forward to those updates! Thanks for the wonderful read, Lace! ^^
Good, keep it coming.
Looking forward to the more updates, I'm so excited for how you're going to fit Sesshomaru in!
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