My heart warms......(squeels!!!) I'm not sure what sweet magic you've casted...but I love all of your characters and the voice in which you tell your story (hugs! Thank you!)

Kyaaa!!!!

*slaps hands over mouth*

Oops...

I mean....

Nice chapter...

update soon...

*runs off*

More, keep it coming.

I just love how swiftly you are updating! Do not overxert yourself or anything though. So far I like how the story is moving along. I noticed you are focusing more on Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship and that is great as well; its great to see Sesshoumaru gradually warming up to her with each chapter at his own pace...but he isn't the only character that is warming up. Its interesting how you have Neikan growing steadily stronger in the background, sending pawns after them every now and then to test them (that is just like Naraku!)

I'm also glad Kagome is going back to training. To be honest I thought she was really stupid in chapter 12 when she complained about Neikan getting stronger beyond the point of her being unable to counteract his powers...then Sesshoumaru tells her the obvious "Just get stronger" it felt like she hadn't bothered to train for awhile and was just focusing too much on being a bookworm. But I can understand, she wants to please Sesshoumaru after all (: I think the two of them are just the cutest, I love how you are developing the relationship between them. I like the Southern lord and his lady as well, they're a nice add to the story to sort of balance the characters out a bit though I do miss Sango and the others. Perhaps you can do a chapter sometime which gives us an update on how Inuyasha and the others are doing ^_^. I'm anticipating seeing how Kagome's powers grow and another clash with Neikan soon as well.

As usual keep up the excellent work. I just feel myself lighting up every time I notice you have updated~!

Nice, keep it coming.

its beginning o be kind of romantic.  i like that the story keeps flowing so nice.  well done .

Really enjoyed this chapter. Love how she is able to read him. 

Sesshomaru. Doubting his abilities. 

He's in love~~!!!

Write this in your journals ladies~! Eat your heats out!

Good, keep it coming. 

in  love

That

was beautiful

*tear*

this is a great story thanks.

Cool, keep it coming.

A good chapter!  But I wish it was longer .......  :)

*whisper*

Scary, scary Sesshomaru....

wuaahh~! great story!!!!!!!!!!

Would it be silly of me to say that so far Neikan is my favorite char? Even though he is so evil and destructive. Actually I just love him, I think he's one of the best adversary characters on here in Dokuga and I applaud you for creating him; his personality is twisted in a kind of evil playful way...I love it.

Anyway I also like the way you are developing Sesshoumaru's character. I've seen a lot of authors make him extremely cold to Kagome initially and I always thought that was a little too harsh and too much...I've seen the anime many times and whose to really know if he'd actually act that way towards her but yours has a nice balance. I like the way the story is developing but I'd love to see Kagome getting back up on her feet quickly and getting stronger! Her barriers weren't robust enough to completely repel Neikan's attacks after all...oh and I am anticipating more fighting scenes between them. For the first time I'm actually enjoying the personality of a villian~

^_^ Good work and well done, please keep up this fantastic work.

Nice, keep it coming.