My, my, my!
Once again lady, you have blown me away with your sheer talent and your dedication to amazing plot and details! I always think I know where this is going and then you throw a curve at me and I'm rendered speechless. Poor Miu, seriously, my heart breaks for her. I'm truly fond of their friendship. Kgome needed someone in this situation and after everything that has happened to Miu she needed someone as well, and they found each other. And you already know I love all your OCs. You are talented at creating characters from scratch.
Inuyasha, Inuyasha. That one really knows how to wreck havoc everywhere he goes. I was really interested to see where you were gonna take this and you did not disappoint! I like that he's sort of wedging himself between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I mean at least he interacts with her. That's a plus. And it's funny because he's bold but he stays hidden. Like oh I have rights, my dad is the Damiyo... oh but my mother is a courtesan so... he seems conflicted about who and what he is.
I'm also intrigued to learn more about Inutaisho and Izayoi. I mean how they started and why their relationship began and turned into what it is now (well not the bad part but the fact that he gave her a child and everything). It saddens me to see that they have fallen apart. But it's a good kind of sad, haha. Like oh god my poor little heart.
Izayoi simply does not like Kagome. And I am seeing a few ways this could do, and could it be? Another love triangle? Gah! Woman! Your writing skills and your plot twist just keep me on my toes! Gah, I never know what's going to happen. But, I do know that Izayoi is an utter bitch in this - although with reasons but nonetheless. I like it, it's a refreshing change. She's always nice so this brings a new take on her character and I can't wait to see how it turns out.
And now Sesshomaru has no choice, he's gonna have to do something about this. Unless he wants his precious little pride to be shattered and we all know he hates that. Haha. Seriously, leave it to Inutaisho to be the one to tip him over the edge. Although he is right. I don't think Sesshomaru would enjoy being laughed at for his virginity. And the fact that he buys a woman that he doesn't take. Although, as you so pointed out INUTAISHO bought her. Could it be an interesting detail? I DON'T KNOW. You're the evil mastermind, and I'm just hooked aha.
That last scene was perfect. PERFECT. AHaha. Poor Kagome, should have taken the towel! Seriously, mister Sesshomaru I don't feelings has a surprise coming his way and I cannot wait to see his reaction (since you know you were evil enough to leave it there!) Once again, a marvelous chapter and I need MORE.
Nice chapter, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
rachel (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 May 2014
Oh how I hate you so! I want more soon! I love it love it love it! i never felt so excited so a story!:)
Ana (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 May 2014
Ohhhhhhhhhh you are evil! xD What kind of cliffhanger is that??? xD
Loved it! Really! Nice work! :D
Thanks for the update! <3
ahhhh! you HAD to stop there? ahh well it was a great chapter. im glad that you;ve come back to update. everything is great. i cant tell that there are any "mistakes" so i loved it and please continue
Hassanah (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 May 2014
You!!! You beast! You have left me waiting so long T_T I mean I love your other stories but no! Dammit this is my favourite !!! You're killing me lol. From the way sesshoumaru acts I'm kind of guessing it's going to take a while for them to get intimate but I hope not! lol I mean I'd at least like some more sess/kag action... Time?! Lool but yeah I love your work! I understand you're moving do yeah please update when you can! I won't lie every morning I come on dokuga looking for this story but obvi always get let down! Lol I was so happy to see!
mari (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 May 2014
great update thanks.
MORE! Please. Soon. :) Great Job!
Akita (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 May 2014
......OMFG....Cliffie?! WHYYYYY?! I need to know more
And so it continues....you've managed to incorporate just how comlex and confusing Japanese "harems" could be, as well as some of the problems that the inhabitants faced. And you've introduced Inuyasha! And a very grumpy Sesshomaru. (Not that he was a surprise...)
I look forward to finding out what happens next. If nothing else, I'm sure it will make for a fun and interesting read.
Thank you
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