Kagome, girl. Get it together!

Oh, God Inupapa is really insufferable in this story. It's funny how he's silently criticizing his son's way of thinking, but his own decision-making processes will likely get him killed. I still don't understand why he actually seems to like Jiro, a dude who clearly isn't loyal or willing to serve to the best of his abilities. And Izayoi's POV is understandable. She's getting old and it's not like she's married, so of course any young girl (ick) Inupapa shows an interest in - whether for his son or not - will make her nervous.

Kagome is new, but she needs to get a grip. She should know her station by now, so why is she acting like a petulant brat, embarrassing herself and "her lord" at every turn? She saw how Miu was treated, did she really think anyone would feel pity for her, especially since her ranking shot up so high in just a day? Geez.

Eh. This third chapter had too many spelling and grammar errrors and the stylistic change was pretty drastic. Even if a dark fic is hard for you to write, this chapter would have been much better written in your usual style.

Man I can't stand Inupapa. Even in the anime he came across as a self-righteous meddler. Now he's a self-righteous hedonist in this story. Ugh!! 

Well everything is out now :/ Great story !

Love this story!!! Please update soon!

Wahhhh so much happened this chapter!!i can't wait to read more !

 PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!!!!! I love the way you write sesshomarus charcter it fits my image of him,i love the dramatic piece of inuyasha bothering kagome and i truly like the way you write the charcter jiro so terrbily disgusting to fit such a story please continue i would love to see what sesshomaru would do after izayoi blew his and kagomes cover of her being a virgin and would love more insight of Dachci (sorry if i misspell it ) and how he plays a part in the story,plus i wanna see if sesshomaru gets the guts to kill jiro love to see that or more surprisly Inutashio! INU-PA IS MY HOMES

I like this younger Sesshoumaru :3 And I love Touga <3

Ohhh! Interesting!! I like this story so far and I just read the first chapter. I cant wait to see how Sessh and Kags grow on each other!

-MissKatt

Yayyy you updated!!! Thank you. I can't wait for the next update :) is Kagome a miko in this story though? Or is she a regular human?

Poor Kagome everybody plotting against her. Why would Chiyo care? It would be interesting if in the end Chiyo isnt such a bad person. The way things are going, it would be best if Kagome and Inuyasha became friends. He could protect her from Jiro, Daichi, and other idiots. If Inutaishio is Damyo why doesn't he punish Jiro and Daichi for their crimes? They dont seem to be useful either. Hope they get what they deserve soon.

Yaaayyy new chapter pleaseee update soon soooon sooon 

Wow so far simply wonderful, and dynamic I can't wait to read more.

Loving it ^_^ kagome should  talk to inuyasha more maybe seasho will get jealous ;) and get to know  inuyasha  better he is not a bad guy ... i hope this happens soon coz i don't  want tht fat guy to have her and i m scared of daichi he doesn't  bode well ... Please please  update soon

Yaaaaaay an update!! Fantastic as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming

I have been waiting to see my bish pop up!! Woohoooo it's been so boring on here since you've been gone *yawn* nothing to read!!! Thanks so much for updating ! Hope your move went well? Sounds as if you had a bumpy start but don't worry everything will work out ! Hmm I don't like where this is going !! *cries* nasty jiro best not touch Kagome !!!! Her innocence is Sesshoumaru's!!!! T_T don't let him interfere too much and this slag bag chiyo loool but yes anywho glad to see you make an appearance again !! Update soon :D toodles