I'm still chuckling while dragging a hand down my face muttering, "Jesus F-ing Chr..." Ya know, I should have known you were the author on this one. Some of your stuff is way too dark for me, but this one just about had me busting out laughing. (It's that shock value...) Ha!
As for the rest of the critics' complaints, ah well. Whine and move on, I say. To each his own. Dark, yep. But hilarious. In it's own twisted way. Two thumbs up :)
oh my O.O
so bad! >.<
XD
kait<3 (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
Really? i give up! i know when i click on one of your stories it's gonna be really weird or horrific but for some reason i can't help myself! i swear your wonderfully demented. you must be one of those people who are really nice and cute and person but your all dark and scary inside. you write brilliantly though so it's all good!
swift death (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
that was sssssoooo not what i had in mind when he joined her for watermelon, nice story by the way
Indigo_Miko (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 May 2010
Holy gut check. This isn't the first time I've read this one shot and I have to say I was intrigued that though I knew the ending I still got that smack in the face surprised sensation. It's just so.. wonderfully dark. In my opinion the fact that this piece ellicited a strong response twice makes it an awesome piece of fanfic.
jk (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Oct 2009
omg so cruel its awesome good job!!!
ghost_youkai (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Feb 2009
| Though unexpected and twisted it had some type of sick humour that I liked. You got my two thumbs up. Keep up the good job ~^_^~
Akumi (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| Hmm. I have some questions about the characterization, but I think people are being to cruel towards you. It was an open challenge, and you wrote your take on it. I thought the writing was well done, even if I don't agree with it. You can't make everyone happy with your veiw can ya? :P Over all, nice creativity! P.S. I think people get mad because most of us want Kagome and Sesshoumaru to end up together. haha
-Akumi
| Huh... I just got punched in the guts (and they said my last chapter was disturbing...lol). I was just reading the others one-shots about watermelons as I found this one... and I must say I was surprised. Nothing to reproach about the witing or style, but I just wasn't expecting it. Next time, please warn us! By the way, I don't think Sess would kill her just like this either. Injure her, probably, but he's far from a pointless killer.
| Well that will definitely wake someone up.
I am not sure as to whether it was good or not. Although, I can certain say it was unexpected. For that I have to give you props.
With your dark twisted little mind.
| Very...disturbing. wish there had been a better warning on it.
| Heh. I didn't expect that but it was darkly humorous.
Elly (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Sep 2008
| Rum..not very like Sesshoumaru to kill pointlessly...but um..it's a twist!
utterchaos247 (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| ....
whywon'tyouwork (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| OMG o.O
| What the hell?! Now that what something else.
But I did like it, I guess. It just took me a moment to get over the shock of it all. XD Looking forward to reading more from you. ^-^
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| See this is what I get for clicking on the link in the forums rather then from the front page, no warning. Next time please mention if it's going to be dark when you post the link in the forums. I thought the story was rather tasteless, but that's just me.
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