Great story, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
oooh, I'm hooked! I'll be continuing on for good. In the third chapter, for some reason the whole story is uploaded twice. It could just be my end having a glitch in the matrix.
THank you for sharing,
Cheebers
Oh wow. What a start!
There are more chapters available, but I just had to leave a comment-- this plot setup is completely captivating. I sencerely look forward to what lies ahead! You have a great writing style--clean with just enough details to keep me curious.
Thank you for sharing,
Cheebers
Midian (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
When would they learn that volume doesn't equal talent?
I know many that have the same lack of information
oh my god. after i read the last lines, a deep sigh just excaped from me. i cant believe that this is only the prologue. i can't wait to see how the rest of your story will unfold. so much is possible. i just...its amazing what you've done so far in so little so please please continue
WOW, OMG, AMAZING keep going :O
Oh wow! What a fantastic start! So sweet and sad at the same time :') Awesome idea for a prologue, truly! Can't wait to see how Kagome arrived at that bench beside him :) This first chapter hints at an amazing story to come!!
WOW IM LOVING IT SO FAR!
Keep It Up!
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Mar 2014
OOOOHHHHHHHHHH........ I LIKE!!! Really........ Really LIKE!!
I'm sitting here all misty eyed... This is AWESOME!!!!
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