I really do like this story and I was wondering, since Sesshamoru told Kagome that he would not be "seeking her out" for "relations," as it were, and she would have to come to him......well I am just wondering if Sessy is thinking about his first time with Kagome at all and is, in fact, starting to desire more "relations" with Kagome like she has just told Sango that she is thinking about the same........... It is very sad that he has outright told her that he does not desire pups ( at least not with her becaues they will be half-human) and that she has only asked that if he finds a demoness that he truly wants to mate, to please wait a few decades until after she dies. Also she wanted to speak with the demoness in question in order to ask for her to have patience to mate Sessy until after she has passed on. How sad!!!!! I hope that this is not Kagome's fate! I am sure that somewhere in this story Sesshamoru develops some feelings for Kagome and vice versa. It is also hopeful that Kagome will live quite a bit longer than a few decades.......... of course, the prelude to this story shows that not only does she live for over 500 years, but that she has at least one hanyo daughter.....silver hair and blue eyes..........how sweet! Now, on to more chapters! Will there be some sort of formal mating ceremony with all of the nobels in attendence? Like a wedding ceremony? Will they need to mate again for this? And where oh where is that flea and Sesshamoru's mother????? Thanks for writing this!
Great, keep it coming.
chili (Chapter 9) - Tue 20 May 2014
After reading more carefully, I finally saw the one line description of what happened. I guess my want for more detail of just how exactly Sessh pulled himself up and over the well has caused me to disregard the line on the first read. I guess one really does only see what one wants to see :(
Plowing on!
chili (Chapter 8) - Tue 20 May 2014
Just wanted to note that chp 8 seems so disconnected from chp 7...
At the end of chp7, Kagome dropped into the well by herself, and sesshomaru dropped in pain... and chp 8 has no mention of that. Sessh in fact just showed up, and there wasn't any mention of pain or anything... just a bit confuzzled...
Other than that, great story so far! Looking forward to more!
Chapter was awesome and funny!!
From within the resulting crater a single clawed hand rose up in triumph out of the tangle of limbs within.
"Worth it!"
XD
Would be more epic if he give a thumb up XD
agenais (Chapter 10) - Sun 18 May 2014
Google Agenais by DONNA LEWIS: for a haunting beautiful song that is not sad but magical. Not a real luluby but works like one.
LMAO!
"Good boy" ???? Kagome is evil!!!!!!
I am enjoying this story, please update soon!!!!
Like, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
nicole (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 May 2014
i hate to be a spolier. i know that is kagome telling her father a story and her daughter with sesshoumaru
Good, keep it coming.
xinyi (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 May 2014
Love the story thus far :) can't wait for the next chapter!
I like your story. I like the premise a life debt being repaid by a mating. I really loved the prologue. I look forward to the next chapter.
Next, keep it coming. Happy Early Easter!
Cool, keep it coming.
looking forward for more!
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