Great story, I read it on fanfiction last month. I'm glad it's on this site, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!

this was an awesome chapter! i cant wait for the next update!

next chapter please

I am loving this story so far. You have a unique portrail of the characters and I love all the emotions you are showing for all of them. Hope you update soon!

There are so many great points to your story so far, as well as the style that you've used.  You've really set the story up quickly and it flows, without losing the impact of her feelings on what's happening. I've thought about a lot of the points that you've made that struck me as ood, but I didn't want to go too far down that rabbit hole.  It's completely odd that you'd be willing to endure and sacrifice so much for someone that hurt you repeatedly, allowed your soul to remain split, that supported the evil action of devouring other women's souls for a false life, keeping her weak, etc.  While Kagome made her own decisions and mistakes, it's another for a group of people to flow with the dysfunction. 

I'm really loving the portrayals of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru!  Also that of Shippo.  The story has a really good balance of elements so far.  I really like how things are going and would love to see this story finished!  Strong writers should write a lot!!  :)

Love this story so far. Keep it going!!

om this is reallly good. i hope you update soon

WOW. I really like the start. You have an amazing writing style that I can't stop reading! Your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshoumaru is very good, too. I hope you will update as soon as possible because I am dying to know how Kagome will 'purge' her soul :)

Very good job on this first chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing the story unfold and the questions Kagome and Sesshoumaru have being answered. Definately got this reader hooked and looking forward to more!

this is awesome! cant  wait for the next chapter

Finally!  Someone who believes as I do.  I've always thought that Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha were not her own.  That they came from Kikyou.  Also, I always got aggravated that Sango, Miroku, and Inuyasha never offered to train her.  Or if they couldn't, at least to encourage her to be trained by someone else.  They merely spoiled her by constantly protecting her.  But, I think part of the blame is on Kagome.  She should have taken it upon herself to want to be trained. 

I really liked this first chapter and am pleased you are portraying Sesshoumaru as her confidante.