Really nice way to end it all up. Good job! I've read your other fic and I really like that one too.
Wow! That was quite the chapter! I love her weapons and her special gifts in using them. Those were very cool. The mating was nicely done. I noticed a few glaring spelling errors...vein instead of vane when Sesshomaru talks to Kagura; bear nor bare (but you used bare correctly during the mating) and one more...writhing not wreath/wreathing ( a wreath is a circular decoration usually used on a door). I bring this up because I know it's "only Fanfiction", but that doesn't mean it should be poorly written. I see a lot of this kind of error here, mostly words used wrongly. Read a lot and learn the meanings and correct spelling of words. Great stories are made greater with proper word use. Great job!
Great chapter! Just full of more things going on. I very much like how you have handled the courting situation. Very nice.
This is moving so nicely along with lots happening. Very nice chapter. Cheers!
Wow! That was a huge, big, stuffed with information chapter ! Nice beginning. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
(Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
Awesome this was cute! I emjoyed it immensely!
(Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2015
very well done
Really well written and entertaining!
I loved this short story. It always was a bit disturbing that Inuyasha always treated Kagome so badly. A sequel would be great. I would love to see what happens with Inuyasha
I am sad that the story has ended but I loved the way you ended it. I loved how Kagome stood strong on her convictions and decided to break ties with the group. I love your writing style and I am going to now go and start reading your latest story. Fascinating final chapter. Great job!
(Chapter 5) - Wed 07 Jan 2015
I liked it! Very nice for a short story and it had very satisfying ending! Great Job!
(Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Jan 2015
That was a Nice Ending.
(Chapter 4) - Fri 02 Jan 2015
So SMEXY HOTTNESS.
(Chapter 5) - Wed 31 Dec 2014
love this story! great ending!
This story was great and I enjoyed it, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
(Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Dec 2014
Ya go talking Tree. Its like a hyperbolic time chamber from Dragon Ball Z.
Nice, keep it coming Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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