Reviews for Soul Cleansing by Serena530

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Siera Serenity Star (Chapter 5) - Wed 31 Aug 2016

Great story!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sun 17 Jul 2016

Really nice way to end it all up. Good job! I've read your other fic and I really like that one too.


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Sun 17 Jul 2016

Wow! That was quite the chapter! I love her weapons and her special gifts in using them. Those were very cool. The mating was nicely done.  I noticed a few glaring spelling errors...vein instead of vane when Sesshomaru talks to Kagura; bear nor bare (but you used bare correctly during the mating) and one more...writhing not wreath/wreathing  ( a wreath is a circular decoration usually used on a door). I bring this up because I know it's "only Fanfiction", but that doesn't mean it should be poorly written. I see a lot of this kind of error here, mostly words used wrongly. Read a lot and learn the meanings and correct spelling of words. Great stories are made greater with proper word use. Great job!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Sun 17 Jul 2016

Great chapter! Just full of more things going on. I very much like how you  have handled the courting situation. Very nice. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Jul 2016

This is moving so nicely along with lots happening. Very nice chapter. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Jul 2016

Wow! That was a huge, big, stuffed with information chapter ! Nice beginning. Looking forward to reading more of this story.


sarah (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2016

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Jul 2015

Awesome this was cute! I emjoyed it immensely!

 

 


Dragon (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2015

very well done


MythMagykFae (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Feb 2015

Really well written and entertaining! 


Dragonscloud (Chapter 5) - Fri 30 Jan 2015

I loved this short story. It always was a bit disturbing that Inuyasha always treated Kagome so badly. A sequel would be great. I would love to see what happens with Inuyasha


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Jan 2015

I am sad that the story has ended but I loved the way you ended it. I loved how Kagome stood strong on her convictions and decided to break ties with the group.  I love your writing style and I am going to now go and start reading your latest story. Fascinating final chapter. Great job!


gabby (Chapter 5) - Wed 07 Jan 2015

I liked it! Very nice for a short story and it had very satisfying ending! Great Job!


Saiya (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Jan 2015

That was a Nice Ending.


Saiya (Chapter 4) - Fri 02 Jan 2015

So SMEXY HOTTNESS.


tonya (Chapter 5) - Wed 31 Dec 2014

love this story! great ending!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

This story was great and I enjoyed it, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


Saiya (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

Ya go talking Tree. Its like a hyperbolic time chamber from Dragon Ball Z.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

Nice, keep it coming Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

I've really enjoyed this story!  You've addressed so many issues and questions from the anime/manga as well as allowed Kagome to grow and learn.  To acknowledge some small flaws that she needed to work on.  I really enjoyed her acceptance of Sesshoumaru and not trying to change everything about him.  There relationship was so strong.  I think you did a really good job with your story and character development.  I've started your other story and look forward to it's update.


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