Oops missed a chapter :S
I'm wondering why he sent the others to a different wing, unless it's just to get closer to Kagome.
Sneaky Sesshoumaru. hehehee
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
P.S. That last review was meant to say good not god, my keyboard doesn't always type all of the letters that I hit :/
Creepy Naraku, he's so EW! lol
Not sure I like the sound of his creepy spider plans, but it'll make for a god story!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
That had to be a difficult word to use!
Excellent job!
~Starfyre
Hmm... moko-moko pillow, tickly yet soft and FUZZY! I loves da fuzzeh!
Great chapter!
~Starfyre
It kinda makes me wonder if he's done it more that just that once, since Sango and Miroku didn't react to the change at all.
Good Job!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Silly Kagome, why would Sesshoumaru harm what is his? Even by simply rejecting some flowers?
Great Job!
~Starfyre
for you being new to writing, this is very good. i wouldnt have known that you were a fic noob if you hadn't told us. everything flows very well. the tiny thing that i would say about this is that you might want to elaborate/describe/detail things a bit more more, but since everything is very good, then you dont need to do that. loved it it was great please continue
"It would have gone much more pleasant if Inuyasha stopped being himself."
That was hilarious! And so very Sesshoumaru
Great Job!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Did he really think that no one would ask him that?
LOL!
~Starfyre
Ack! The Childrens!
They are just too cute! The Adorable factor!
I'm -
*melts into a puddle of mom goo*
I remember when mine was that little! T.T
*sniffles*
Love this chapter!
~Starfyre
Awe! Rin is so cute!
I love how you portrayed her thoughts and feelings!
Great Job!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Very well written!
~Starfyre
she has a very one track mind.
If taking the jewel out of the world didn't work the first time, you'd think that she would realize that it won't work the second time either.
lol
Great chapter!
~Starfyre
Very interesting back story between them.
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
P.S. I can't believe I put insiteful instead of insightful on that last review! I must be too tired to be up at this point. ; )
Chapter 2 is very insiteful in a way I can't remember anyone else proposing as a cause for the joining of packs on Sesshoumaru's part before.
Great Job!
~Starfyre
Interesting idea for promtps and I like the way the first chapter is so clean and to the point without lacking in detail
Great Job!
~Starfyre
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