PLEASE write more!! I really love how this story is so believable! Yes seeing each other from across the room and falling in love is a nice story, but I love that you put detail into it and it flows! I have added you as a favorite author and this as a facorite story to keep a look out for any updates... This is by far the best story I've read on this site along with apples and cinnomin. You have a good talent and if you ever publish a novel I'd buy it. :)

I really like this....the flow of the story is good also.  Please do continue!!