Haha, awesome! I'm enjoying the heck out of this. Love how Kagome isn't taking any of Sess and Kouga's crap, even knowing how much stronger they are than her. And I really like Kouga's role in this - he's a nice counterpoint to Sesshoumaru's coldness and his interactions with Kagome seriously crack me up. I also like how you're still mirroring some aspects of the original canon, like Kags freeing Inuyasha and serving as a mother figure for Shippo. I love little Shippo to death, so I'm thrilled to see him at Kagome's side in this story :D
I did notice one thing in this chapter: a few paragraphs from the top, you say "Now that the East and the West could communicate again..." but earlier you had indicated that Kouga is the demon prince of the South, right? Confused me a bit, so I just thought I'd point that out.
Anyway, great story! First S/K/K I've read, and I'm liking it a lot! Til' next time... :)
- C
Do not fear i thought it was funny too. I am so far living this story and hopefully i smell a three some in the future >,> and yea! I would totally love to see sess spank her
Man i love your protrail of kagome. Love her sass. Can't wait for the next chapter
OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Wow poor kagome can't wait to read more
Loving this story, so far, and fascinated to see where you're going with it! Very interesting setup. I love Kagome's voice in this one--intelligent, doesn't take shit, and really cleverly snarky. Liking Kouga a lot, too. Liking Sess, but would love to see more of him!
Akita (Chapter 4) - Tue 07 Jan 2014
No to the slower updates, a resounding yes to more chapters please!
Koda (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Jan 2014
I'm a major Sess/ Kag/ Kouga fan :) so I believe I'm gonna like this story ;)
Very nice work so far! I am looking forward to seeing how Kagome adjusts to her new lifestyle.... And hopefully she gets a bath lol
DC
no sex in chp 4 but will there be sex in chp5?
love this fanfic kee p it up.
There is not enough S/K/K stories in the world and I just love your please update soon!!
Akita (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
since I'm reviewing you should know I want more
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
There's something that doesn't make any sense, sess mentioned they were cursed to be unable to understand each other yet they appeared to have no problem communicating. What's up with that?
plz d chp 3 soon, 3um sounds so good right now.
Jade (Chapter 2) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
I like it and would love to read more.
Akita (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jan 2014
This is an interesting turn. Please, keep going
Suka25 (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jan 2014
MORE!!!!!!!
starfish7 (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Jan 2014
So far after reading both chapters, I like the story a lot. It definitely has potential to be a really good story. I am looking forward to what Kagome's duties will be as a bonded servant to both demons and how other demons will treat her.
Very interesting concept! I look forward to more!
DC
Milly (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jan 2014
i do so love it! please keep writing you are doing a wonderful job. i can not wait for chapter 3. my mind can only imagine where you may take the story line. so untill then i hope the writring muses are kind and merciful to you.
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