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Michele_Lei (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Jun 2021
A fascinating and easy read! Your writing is effortless! Your sentences, thoughts, and story flow beautifully! Sess and Kag’s personality and mannerisms seem pretty spot on though I would think that Sess would have developed more loyalty toward Kagome fighting alongside her and with her saving him and vice versa. It’s a shame this story was abandoned. I would have enjoyed continuing to read it.

Mia (Chapter 15) - Fri 03 Jul 2015

It has been do long. :( please do update.


Mia (Chapter 15) - Wed 02 Jul 2014

Very interesting!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Sat 25 Jan 2014

Nice chapters, keep it coming.


Kae (Chapter 15) - Sat 25 Jan 2014

YES. Yes I did like it. yes indeedy. :)


Allyonora (Chapter 15) - Sat 25 Jan 2014

Well, it's simple. The name of those kind of actions are abuse. When a guy hurt you, physically, for no justifiable reason, and you can't defend yourself - it's abuse. So, I think it's time for Kagome to gater her things and go explore the world, just as she was going to do in the first time. A life debt isn't the same as slavery, so she doesn't have to tolerate this kind of behavior...


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 15) - Sat 25 Jan 2014

Thought provoking......


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 14) - Fri 24 Jan 2014

*glares at you*  NO..no..no...nope...gonna fight you if you do not update soon. Great story!!


chevonne knowles (Chapter 14) - Fri 24 Jan 2014

You know, i dont think sesshomarus mom realy cared about what their father did. 

And if he does what this verson of his mother says he would be nothing but a pon.


elizabeth (Chapter 14) - Fri 24 Jan 2014

kagome purifies the face to the fiance sesshomaru and stay forever desfigurited  asy


chevonne knowles (Chapter 13) - Wed 22 Jan 2014

Are you being mean to her you dont treat a gest that way


consuelo marquez (Chapter 13) - Wed 22 Jan 2014

ooooh all dem bitches be showin' up at sesshoumaru's crib!  because, you know, theyre INUyoukai.  i cant wait for the next chapter. the chemistry between these two is developing and getting even better. like how sesshoumaru doesnt seem to want to kill her AS MUCH.  haha love it and please continue!


consuelo marquez (Chapter 10) - Sat 11 Jan 2014

ooooooh.   i read your story a little while back and im glad to say that your writing is getting better and by that i mean that the flow is getting more....flow-y.  its coming along together very nicely is what im trying to say

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Sat 11 Jan 2014

Nice, keep it coming. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Wed 08 Jan 2014

Nice chapter, keep it coming.


Itoe (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Jan 2014

Dear Leonie,

So far, I like this story very much, except for Inuyasha, I still hate that boy. :-)

Anyway... This story seems to be one of the "special" ones, where Kagome and Sesshomaru hate eachother (and therefore do not fall so easily in love with each other). ♥

I liked it very much, that the young lord ignored her after he had saved her. That is very much like him. Also, that Kagome was at a loss of words and did not try to "repay" him for his help or try to thank him and all nice things she generally does in most of the other FF's. :-)

Now, that "fate striked" she came to help him. Everything is like "if you help me, then I help you".

I can not wait to read more of this story. :-)

Keep it up.

Cheers

Itoe


Blossom34 (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Jan 2014

Aw man.This is the last chapter for now but this is just great.I cant wait for you to finish it.I bet it's going to be totally awesome.Please update as as soon as u can:-)  I really like this one 


Blossom34 (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Jan 2014

Aw man.This is the last chapter for now but this is just great.I cant wait for you to finish it.I bet it's going to be totally awesome.Please update as as soon as u can:-)  I really like this one 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Tue 07 Jan 2014

Nice, keep it coming. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Mon 06 Jan 2014

Liking three chapters, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


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