This is a lot of fun to read. I love how in character everyone is and I'm really looking forward to reading more. I'm especially enjoying how it seems like Kagome is the one with the actual anger management issues.
I'm being torn apart! Your awesome chapter is causing my naturally ambivalent nature to rear its head!
On the one hand, I'm totally freaking out in a good way because, I mean, come on! Miroku/Kagome partnership is almost as good as Kagome/Shippo partnership, only in a different way. I'm loving it! And this is totally going to lead to some awesome stuff beacause Kagome wants to show Sesshomaru his place!
On the other hand, I'm still feeling sorry for Sesshomaru, because even if it looks like he's winning, and even if he continues to mostly win through the whole story, he's going to be put through a lot of pain in the process.
Meh!
Who am I kidding?
I'm only freaking out in a good way!
Put that "grey-haired, over-sized poodle" in his place, Kags!
By any means necessary!!!!
(I just love that insult.)
AWESOME!!!!
Right after Sesshomaru and Shippo, Miroku is my favorite!
I love your potrayal of him! It's awesome.
Also love how Kagome just went straight at him with her request. Poor Miroku. He has no idea what he's getting himself into.
...
Well, actually, he might, but still.
Poor Miroku.
I also feel slightly bad for Sesshomaru.
On to the next chapter!!!
Okay..I very much enjoyed that and cannot wait to see what else you have in store.
Hehehahaha!
I love how she thinks he did it just to bother her. I also love the whole self preservation thing.
She doubts her mouth has one, and yet she's walking towards him of her own volition....
I worry about her.
Awesome! Loving it!
lol My word! I hope you write more
Oh no... not a good idea Kagome. Not a good idea
Oh my gosh! ROFL so funny
That... that was a masterpiece.
There's nothing else to say.
You're brilliant.
Just brilliant.
She's good. Really really good. That was my first thought.
And then I almost fell out of my chair with a screech of shock (and maybe a bit of fear) when Sesshomaru turned to look at her.
That was intense, like one of those scenes in movies where everything is calm and then all of a sudden this creepy person shows up out of nowhere right when the main character turns around. Seriously. I felt like that.
And then, I was all like, Sesshomaru is really going to regret this. A furious Kagome is unstoppable and a whole lot scarier than a creepy person jumping out of nowhere in a suspense film.
Go forth and conquer Kagome!
LOL! He must be a very. very difficult client to anyone :)
I think I felt my eyes sting I was laughing so hard! They were going to reform him into the perfect catch? I dididn't know that was the ultimate goal!
I was freaking out when I read that she asked him! Seriously, I hadn't even read what comes next, but I swear I was spasming! And then I shrieked with her! Why is he all up in her face?!?
CREEP!!
Oh my goodness! What does she have in mind? Is she going to die?
I LOVE THIS!!!
I had a smile on my face the whole time i read this. So like Kagome to try and help someone, and Sesshomaru so stoic and unapproachable she will have her work cut out for her. I hope she keeps her wits about her next time they meet. I am curious as to what she will say or do. Update soon!
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