That bit with Shippou and Sesshoumaru was sweet.
OMG
This is such an amazing story and THIS chapter is my fave fave favorite so far!!!!! You have no idea how much I love Sess mom...she literally makes me crazy happy when written in a certain way. She almost might maybe rival only S/K in my adoration in INY fics. I love when stories don't portray her as a raging pyscho bitch bc I didn't get that feeling from the story.
Your KIMI is on point - wickedly intelligent, cunning, beautiful, maternal, but above all she is superior, as well she should bc well, she is Sess' mum, duh and you didn't make her evil! Praise the lord. I love her. I hope there is more "HER"
The exchange between Sess and mum in this chapter is just perfection - everything was reasonably thought out, the strategies makes sense and the dialogue (omg, omg, omg) is exactly as it should be. The way you write Sess' thought process is just...I mean, I literally have no words, it's sooo good.
Anyway, I'm just glad I have a few more chapters to read. Hopefully, by the time I'm nearly finished, you will post another chapter:)
Bravo. I love this story, but I just had to rave about this chapter in particular.
I literally might be obsessed with this story. I considered getting in trouble at work today just so I could sit and read the new chapter on my phone lolz. I'm honestly interested in seeing what you have planned for Ko. I didn't think you would put her in it past her involvement with helping Kagome escape the North but now I find myself intrigued. ALSO! Kimi makes my freaking day. I love how you have written her as this conniving, manipulating, but ridiculously likeable in deviousness, character (in my opinion anyway). I'm just tickled. I can't wait to see what's next!
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 26) - Mon 30 Jun 2014
great update thanks.
The depths of Ryukostokken's hatred and rage are truly terrifying. I am so frightened that he will find out about Ko's vision and/or her role in Kagome's escape. I love Ko so much - you've created such an awesome cast of original characters in this story! Ko is one of my favorites, though, and my heart will be torn to pieces if she cannot find freedom from this monster soon. ;_;
Loved the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome in this chapter! Such sweet and funny (and sexy!) moments :) It's so nice for them to have a little bit of peace between themselves. Can't imagine how this meeting with Kimi and Inuyasha is gonna go, though! - especially if it somehow takes place at the baths, haha
Keep up the awesome work, girl! This fanfiction is amazing :)
*stary eyes*
So cool....
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