Oooh, interesting take on this prompt. I would've gone for a more rape-y feel since my mind is just cruel that way but I had never even thought of it as a breeding place for mistrust and anger. I have to aplaud on being far more original than I would've been with this prompt. I still want to do my rape-y nidus one-shot though. Originality (not sure if that's a word) be damned.

Good job!

PS: I know I could just PM this to you but since I'm writing this review, I hope you don't mind. I fixed Guess (that was an embarrassing mistake -blushes-) and as for Melodious, that was just because I didn't have the banner before me to copy the definition but I already had an idea of what it was so I just wrote it down with my habit of injecting more words than I need.

this is really dark LOVING IT and my apologies 4 not leaving a review 4 ur storys don't be mad oh and u left u a quick message hope u got it if not tell me kk XD

Oooh, Rin-Rin likey. I can really see that as how Kagome would react if she killed a human. 

Very interesting. I like it, it seems very much like Kagome and it is definitely a good description of who Sesshomaru is. He'll be around many years, watching from Sengoku to Meiji to now, if he stays in Japan that is.

Thanks for sharing!

More, keep it coming. 

Well that was definitely a gamble for Kagome to take, but certainly one I think she would've in the series, though of course in the series (and most fanfics) she'd make it though and come out the hero. I like that you didn't take that route with this one. We can't win every gamble we make and one of these days, after all the wins she'd accumulated, perhaps running will come second to mind before taking the gamble.

But now Rin-Rin's just getting speculative.

I liked Sesshomaru in this one. I can definitely see him feeling respect towards a fallen comrade, human albeit, if they died to protect the next generation. So props to you for that as well.

Thanks for sharing.

Great chapter, keep it coming.

Interesting...

Personally I think this idea is far more realistic than the actual series. Kagome always just took and didn't really act like there was much difference between their times, and that it didn't hurt her life in the future. Originally for NaNo I was going to write a story in which Kagome was expelled and her mom forced her to choose between duty and family, though out of concern of course, and Kagome chose duty.

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting start... Please continue... sorry for the late review... read it a few days back

Meant to review when I first read this, got distracted by Chinese dramas. -__-

Anyways, I liked this better than the first one. Sessho wasn't all batshit insane but he had the edge to him that was slightly insane, though he kept it locked away. I really enjoyed it.

Thanks.

Keep it coming. 

wow this story sounds like going 2 be really dark.... can't wait 4 the next chapter (evil laugh) XD

I liked it, good use of the prompt and the darkness was good. I really want to see more of this story... there is so much to be added. Why is she still with him, why is he the way he is?

My only real complaint is the vaguness. I honestly didn't know who the man was though I assume it to be Sesshomaru. More back story would help.

Karma as well as this story was created around the prompt.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.