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Luna C. (Chapter 43) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

I wonder what is killing her, seven moons is a definitely a short time to live. I guess Sesshomaru had feelings for her if his reaction was that strong.

 


satuross (Chapter 42) - Tue 21 Jan 2014

darn being licked to death. must be the best way to die.


Luna C. (Chapter 41) - Wed 15 Jan 2014

Ugh jeslous females, I don't understand why Ayame couldn't wait until Kagome died of old age and then have Kouga since she'll still probably look the same. -______-

Can't wait for your next update. I hope it'll be something morbid, I really enjoy those especially if it's Kagome and Sesshomaru lol.


satuross (Chapter 40) - Fri 10 Jan 2014

probably the only truely non OC sesshy in dokuga. har har har


Luna C. (Chapter 38) - Sun 29 Dec 2013

This chapter made me wince, poor Kagome! She should have purified him despite that kick to the shin, but then if he survived, the that could have spelled bigger trouble for her.


Luna C. (Chapter 37) - Sun 29 Dec 2013

Ahahah Inuyasha just had to sneeze. Strange how Seshsomaru seemed unfazed by the cobwebs and he has a more heightened sense of smell.


Stella Mira (Chapter 35) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

I always thought of them as a clash of fire and ice, their relationship burning and flowing like firewater. You portrayed that with lovely descriptions and contrasts and comparisons. Beautiful words and bittersweet feels... the feelz!

Wonderful one-shot, Randomness! I loved it!


satuross (Chapter 38) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

Darn... Just what one would expect from a title named lost of innocence


satuross (Chapter 37) - Fri 27 Dec 2013

i wish you wrote a bit about the gore when they got slaughtered. :( like where kagome's arms went. where inuyasha's ear's were plastered to at the wall. and how many bits of rin... ok ill stop.


Rhonda (Chapter 2) - Mon 23 Dec 2013

The second chapter "I don't do Charity" still haunts me sometime.... I can just picture Sesshoumaru looking over the edge of the cliff watching Kags fall to her death with a gleam in his eyes..... and the one about the haunted forest made me think of the real hauted suicide forest there in Japan..... creepy.

Please do continue with these macarbe offerings....always edgy and enjoyable.


Luna C. (Chapter 35) - Mon 23 Dec 2013

Aw I love this one! Though I like it when Kagome becames immortal when she mates Sesshomaru, her retaining her mortality is bittersweet.


satuross (Chapter 35) - Mon 23 Dec 2013

so sad. this is the true ending for writers who make s x k end up as mates without lengthening kagome's lifespan,

 

sad sad

 

oh. make one where sesshy extends kagome's life span and he dies first. in front of her.


satuross (Chapter 34) - Sat 21 Dec 2013

aww. i was secretly hoping sesshy will say "you arent kikyo reincarnation, you are useless" *whips head off with youki whip*


Wunderberry (Chapter 34) - Sat 21 Dec 2013

I always had to wonder if they were really reincarnations. Sure, the whole soul thing and whatnot made me go like, okay, yeah she's the reincarnation but everyone originally just based it on appearence alone. *Rolls eyes*

By that logic, maybe Rin or any other Japanese woman with brown eyes and black hair could be the reincarnation. So ridiculous.

But why is she there if not as Kikyo's reincarnation? Does it have to do with Sesshomaru or my snoring dog?


Wunderberry (Chapter 33) - Sat 21 Dec 2013

Ooh, does she hit the mark? Does she splatter brains across the battlefield and run to scoop up the jewel? Does the seemingly never ending cycle end?

I like it. Good use of the prompt.


Luna C. (Chapter 31) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

So impulsive, Kagome needs to slow her roll! It's not the 21st century where you can slap the ish outta people and not die from it. I feel that she was a little out of place to go up to dangerous demons and slapping them when a flick of their wrist could easily kill her. Like Sesshomaru wasn't the only one that treated Inuyasha bad, then she would have slapped everybody in the face for their conduct towards him. And then her apology annoyed me lol! I'm like, 'you shouldn't have slapped him in the first place'!


Luna C. (Chapter 27) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

I like this chapter, it was thoughtful of Kagome to warn everybody, especially Sesshomaru of the circumstances, but if it was written down then it's inevitable, Kagome can't change fate.


Luna C. (Chapter 24) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

Kagome's shins snapping made me cringe! Ouch!


Luna C. (Chapter 22) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

Oh no baby's death! I was very hesitant of reading the rest of this chapter after the first sentence of the second paragraph. Anything that has something to do with a baby in a painful way makes me feel an intense sadness. But Shippou shouldn't have practice his magic since babies need supervising at all times. Anyways this was well-written and emotion-provoking.


Luna C. (Chapter 20) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

Omh this was so sad, I loved it though. For Kikyo to be given another chance and have a baby with the man she loves, it was so beautiful. I'm glad you gave Kikyo a chance at fertility.


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