darn being licked to death. must be the best way to die.
Ugh jeslous females, I don't understand why Ayame couldn't wait until Kagome died of old age and then have Kouga since she'll still probably look the same. -______-
Can't wait for your next update. I hope it'll be something morbid, I really enjoy those especially if it's Kagome and Sesshomaru lol.
probably the only truely non OC sesshy in dokuga. har har har
Luna C. (Chapter 38) - Sun 29 Dec 2013
This chapter made me wince, poor Kagome! She should have purified him despite that kick to the shin, but then if he survived, the that could have spelled bigger trouble for her.
Luna C. (Chapter 37) - Sun 29 Dec 2013
Ahahah Inuyasha just had to sneeze. Strange how Seshsomaru seemed unfazed by the cobwebs and he has a more heightened sense of smell.
I always thought of them as a clash of fire and ice, their relationship burning and flowing like firewater. You portrayed that with lovely descriptions and contrasts and comparisons. Beautiful words and bittersweet feels... the feelz!
Wonderful one-shot, Randomness! I loved it!
Darn... Just what one would expect from a title named lost of innocence
i wish you wrote a bit about the gore when they got slaughtered. :( like where kagome's arms went. where inuyasha's ear's were plastered to at the wall. and how many bits of rin... ok ill stop.
Rhonda (Chapter 2) - Mon 23 Dec 2013
The second chapter "I don't do Charity" still haunts me sometime.... I can just picture Sesshoumaru looking over the edge of the cliff watching Kags fall to her death with a gleam in his eyes..... and the one about the haunted forest made me think of the real hauted suicide forest there in Japan..... creepy.
Please do continue with these macarbe offerings....always edgy and enjoyable.
Luna C. (Chapter 35) - Mon 23 Dec 2013
Aw I love this one! Though I like it when Kagome becames immortal when she mates Sesshomaru, her retaining her mortality is bittersweet.
so sad. this is the true ending for writers who make s x k end up as mates without lengthening kagome's lifespan,
sad sad
oh. make one where sesshy extends kagome's life span and he dies first. in front of her.
aww. i was secretly hoping sesshy will say "you arent kikyo reincarnation, you are useless" *whips head off with youki whip*
I always had to wonder if they were really reincarnations. Sure, the whole soul thing and whatnot made me go like, okay, yeah she's the reincarnation but everyone originally just based it on appearence alone. *Rolls eyes*
By that logic, maybe Rin or any other Japanese woman with brown eyes and black hair could be the reincarnation. So ridiculous.
But why is she there if not as Kikyo's reincarnation? Does it have to do with Sesshomaru or my snoring dog?
Ooh, does she hit the mark? Does she splatter brains across the battlefield and run to scoop up the jewel? Does the seemingly never ending cycle end?
I like it. Good use of the prompt.
Luna C. (Chapter 31) - Fri 20 Dec 2013
So impulsive, Kagome needs to slow her roll! It's not the 21st century where you can slap the ish outta people and not die from it. I feel that she was a little out of place to go up to dangerous demons and slapping them when a flick of their wrist could easily kill her. Like Sesshomaru wasn't the only one that treated Inuyasha bad, then she would have slapped everybody in the face for their conduct towards him. And then her apology annoyed me lol! I'm like, 'you shouldn't have slapped him in the first place'!
Luna C. (Chapter 27) - Fri 20 Dec 2013
I like this chapter, it was thoughtful of Kagome to warn everybody, especially Sesshomaru of the circumstances, but if it was written down then it's inevitable, Kagome can't change fate.
Luna C. (Chapter 24) - Fri 20 Dec 2013
Kagome's shins snapping made me cringe! Ouch!
Luna C. (Chapter 22) - Fri 20 Dec 2013
Oh no baby's death! I was very hesitant of reading the rest of this chapter after the first sentence of the second paragraph. Anything that has something to do with a baby in a painful way makes me feel an intense sadness. But Shippou shouldn't have practice his magic since babies need supervising at all times. Anyways this was well-written and emotion-provoking.
Luna C. (Chapter 20) - Fri 20 Dec 2013
Omh this was so sad, I loved it though. For Kikyo to be given another chance and have a baby with the man she loves, it was so beautiful. I'm glad you gave Kikyo a chance at fertility.
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