Hoping for an update soon...love this story....the cliffhanger in the last chapter was evil missy :)
god woman i love this story already please write more! ...although I have 3-4 more chapters to read! anyways, thought i'd check in now instead of when i was done reading because of an error i found; kag says bank and her used to date, but when bank was investigating her on sesshomaru's hire, he didn't recognize her. just friendly advice. :)
please please PLEASE update this soon!
BriAnne (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jan 2016
I ever so patiently await your update and wonder when he will realize that the male was her brother because that will be hilarious
hummm so she's happy he's divorcing her. Wonder why? MAybe there's a clause in the marriage or prenup? Cannot wait for more!
Haven (Chapter 10) - Mon 20 Apr 2015
I find the story interesting although I have to admit I wish this Sess was more likable. So far he doesn't have too many redeeming qualities. I hope that changes. Thanks for writing.
Nicole (Chapter 10) - Mon 20 Apr 2015
Kagome's description of the bond Sesshomarnu imposed on her and the conflict within herself because of it was very poetically written. Setsuma's reaction to her message is now included in things-that-make-you-go-hmmmm.
Finally i found a story that sesshomaru cheating with kagome.
Is not that i support the 'cheating'.
I just search different story.
Debra (Chapter 10) - Mon 20 Apr 2015
Great story. I remember reading the first chapter, but I guess I thought it was a one shot or forgot to follow. Either way I am glad I saw it again. I can't wait for the next chapter.
rose (Chapter 10) - Mon 20 Apr 2015
next chapter please
Cheryl (Chapter 9) - Thu 16 Apr 2015
love this story, especially the way sesshomaru is portrayed in such a sexy primal way~ keep up the good work!
Elspeth (Chapter 9) - Wed 15 Apr 2015
Awesome. Seriously awesome. I've been cackling over your use of modern jargon.
Zyren (Chapter 9) - Wed 15 Apr 2015
I like this but I think I need a little more background. Sesshoumaru is exceptionally unreasonable. It didn't sound like he was going to leave his wife based on what Kagome saW at the resturant and why wasn't he mated to his wife in the first place?
I just started to read this story now I'm hooked. I can't wait to read more.
Whats to happen to his wife will she be a woman scorned or will she just go away quietly. poor thing to be jilted like that. poor kags to be in a situaton(sp) like that. That happened to me once he told me he was never married. And it was his mom who told me he was married. I droped him like a hot potato.
Nicole (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2015
I have to admit, I'm hoping Kagome gets away (particularly in the end). Sesshomaru is highly disturbed, and you definitely called it
right in the last few chapters: he has a complete disregard for both his wife and Kagome - and that's not cool with me.
Nicole (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2015
I have to admit, I'm hoping Kagome gets away (particularly in the end). Sesshomaru is highly disturbed, and you definitely called it
right in the last few chapters: he has a complete disregard for both his wife and Kagome - and that's not cool with me.
Beachvilla (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2015
Glad you aren't abandoning it. Can't wait to see how the hunt goes.
Kyo (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2015
I love the progress of this story. However there are too many errors that takes away the effect taht you are trying to impart to your audiences. It needs beta-ing.
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