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AnimeLady04 (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

uh ho......wonder if Kikyo was with Inu? If that's the case then another piece of Kagome's innocent heart may break.
But I think Kagome's inner strength will prevail and she will prove to Sesshomaru she is not going to truly became dark.

 

I would love to see how Onigumo turns Naraku - I'm hoping that's the way you're going?
Can't wait for more!


satuross (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

yayyy. drama hehehehe

 

maybe they will find them copulating in a cave with inuyasha


Koi (Chapter 17) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

Sooo good! I can't wait until the next chapter!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Tue 18 Feb 2014

Great chapters, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 17) - Tue 18 Feb 2014

I wonder if Sesshomaru will see who Kagome really is before he ends up destroying something worthwhile in a land full of evil.....wonder if Kagome will forgive Sesshomaru for assisting in the murdering of Onigumo.....sooooo many questions!~!!!!!

Love this plot you got going. Will you let Shippo, Miroku, and Sango enter into the picture too?


hana sora (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014

 

keep it coming!


satuross (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014

what a tease. gosh kagome.


Neelixonee (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014

I feel bad for Onigumo...then again I am biased and I have a thing for villians.  Naraku is a fave.  There is just something heartbreaking about a villian's past that twists them so hard, you can do nothing but pity them.  Inversely, the hero usually has a damaging past but they aren't so far broken that they can't move from it, thus working harder to make life better, maybe not for themselves, but others.

 

Ex: Loki> major fan girls.

 

I loved the last couple chapters and Kagome's interations with each of the characters.  I love the development.  A part of me wishes for Onigumo to make that jump to Naraku to make Sesshoumaru's life more complicated, but I will be happy with wherever this goes.

 

Thank you for another great chapter!!!

 


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014

Now he should know he was taking advantage of her in an emotional state!

Poor girl, i wonder where her sister is though

I cant wait until Kagome finds out that Sesshomaru led the villagers to Onigumo

Update soon please!


Koi (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014

OMG I'm in love with this chapter! What a tease! Lol. This was getting sooooooo goood! im glad Sesshy has self control because that could have ended messy. Lol I hope that Sesshy gets rid of the thought of turning her into something he's not you know? Kag and Sesshy could have a long lasting relationship if he just let go of the idea of currupting her. Lol GREAT JOB with this wonderful story I can't wait for the next update!!!


Stella Mira (Chapter 15) - Wed 05 Feb 2014

It's been a while since I've left you a review, and I felt that one was due. ^^

I'm impressed with your character development. Especially, in our dear Kagome's case. I love how you made her this insecure girl, still wet behind the ears, with normal fears and self-doubt. It's thrilling to see how she adapts to the situations forced upon her, how she grows mentally, and learns that not all things are black or white, that there is no reason why she must be one thing and cannot be another at the same time, that purity doesn't mean chastity.

Sesshomaru is as deliciously evil as he has alays been. His transformation is more subtle, but undeniable, nonetheless. The more he entagles himself with this woman, the more he starts to understand that humans are not labels, but actual people with feeling, and unpredictable in their reactions. He expects to see darkness in everything, but 'tis not how the real world works, and much like Kagome he must now accept this.

Your writing is as beautiful as ever, it flows, and I never say that easily. Wonderfully descriptive, and expressive. You make me empathize with all characters, make them real, full fledged people I can relate with, even the villains. Amazing! Well done!

Congrats on your nomination, too! It was well desrved, and I wish you the best on the awards!

Looking forward to more soon, yes?


Mikazuki (Chapter 15) - Fri 31 Jan 2014

Sesshomaru is just so evil!!! It fits him so well and this story is amazing!

please update soon...can't wait to see what happens


iin (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

woa...a jealousy sessy? thanks for update


Koi (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

This is soooo good. I can't wait until the next update. I wonder how sesshy will handle his new found feelings for kag?? 


Andreaa (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

Ahhh what a great chapter!! Am I the only one hoping Onigumo returns as Naraku wanting to take Kagome away from

 Seashomaru? >.>


satuross (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

sesshy ALWAYS get what he wants. naraku


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

Really Sesshomaru....hasn't he figured out that Kagome would be appalled to learn that he incited the villagers to kill Onigumo and he allowed her harm before "saving" her?

Poor Kagome, right now, even though Sesshomaru has admitted he has feelings for her, he believes he can "teach" her his lessons and change her. It seems as if he still thinks of her as a pawn still.

I do enjoy your story line though and cannot wait for the next chapter.
Maybe we can see Kikyo and Inuyasha in the next few chapters!!!!


s_spina (Chapter 14) - Tue 21 Jan 2014

I second satuross review! :p


s_spina (Chapter 14) - Tue 21 Jan 2014

but where has Sesshoumaru gone??

great story!


satuross (Chapter 14) - Mon 20 Jan 2014

Lemons next chapter hehehe


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