its going along rather well.   although there are some thing s that need to be done to make it a bit better.   please try to make the situation a bit more believable.  im not saying that sesshoumaru needs to be cruel and heartless, but try to make it...believble i guess...i hope you know what im trying to say :/      i like it so far  and please continue it

Loving both chapters, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

This story seems like it could get good. I like how you started it out in a familiar setting with some action. You managed to capture Inuyasha's brash character and Kagome's passionate one well enough, but Sesshomaru needs to be more stoic and less outwardly responsive. The only reason I could imagine him grabbing Kagome is for answers. Unless of course it was your intention to deviate from their original personalities slightly, then ignore please ignore my criticism. :)

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.