Keep it coming.
Hm, her son sounds like a stud and I really like his attitude. Of course, with his genes, he would be a total hottie. XDD
Glad to read another serial from you. Update soon, ne?
P.S. I have to say that this is an intriguing idea, but I'm confused on the ages of the characters. Kagome has a grown up son and has attested that some decades have passed since his birth. That would make her at best in her late 30's - probably early 40's - since she must have been an adult to take sperm from a sperm bank and her son would still be in his ealry 20's. Unless, you have some explanantion for this planned in the next chapters - like say he marured quickly or she stopped aging after the birth (though, she doesn't seem to know about youkai judging by her reaction to when the lawyer's eyes changed color for a moment, so I find it unlikely. If that's what had happened then she would have researched and eventually found out about youkai.). In that case, ignore my rant. Or, is she actually around the ages I described and you simply haven't mentioned it yet? Hm, cougar Kaggie - not bad, not bad at all! LOL (now I have an idea for an older Kagome..T.T I blame you for this!)
mari (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013
really getting good thanks.
Haha! I loved this chapter and how Sho reacted lol so funny~!
Can't wait for the next chapter
Caera (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013
Ha! A very nice chapter... Love it to pieces
Ealla (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013
Oh my god I love it!!!
This chapter was great. I love Sho and his attitude. I can't wait to see what happens next. Enjoy your trip
Neo-Crystal (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
Ooo! I like Sho already! 3:)
rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
next chapter please
Shirley Hashim (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
Dear LM Bluejay
Thank you. It will be most interesting when Sho meets Sesshoumaru!
Nice, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
liking it more thanks.
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