Now I really wish there was more of this story

Such a new and intriguing idea! It just clicks! Like it's meant to be! I really hope you will find time and inspiration to update soon! So curious to see more!thx for sharing!

All five chapters are cool, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

Keep it coming.

Great, keep it coming.

 Great chapters, keep it coming. 

So good, keep it coming.

More, keep it coming.

All five chapters are awesome, keep it coming.

Can't get enough, keep it coming.

This story is awesome! Keep it up! Excited to see what plays out :)

Cool, keep it coming.

More, keep it coming.

keep it coming

All five chapters are awesome, keep it coming.

I can't wait until they meet.  Can you please hurry with the next chapters??  Please?

More, keep it coming. 

Loving all nine chapters, keep it coming.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

So far your story has an almost poetic feel to it. Some sentence structures are odd but the rhythm still flows. 

Beware of where of quotation marks and comma placement. And make sure you change the story's type from chapter story to oneshot collections.

Other than that, you're off to a good start. :)