really like this story thanks.

Loving it, Keep it coming.

Great chapter, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.  

Oh how interesting you went right for the bite.  lol  So what will happen next will they have a struggle to get along?  Will Sesshoumaru ditch her somewear only to have his beast mentaly attack him in his head?  Oh if that did happen who ever had been after her could find her and when Sesshoumaru gave up his mental resistance and went to find her she would already be gone.  Things could goe a bunch of directions from their.  Oh but he could take her to his home only to find out she was the escape intentend of some cruel neiboring land and a war is started amongst them.  Oh and that is not even the least of the things that could happen next.  I'm curious what will you have them do?  How will Kagome react?

It is Kagome right? >.<   ^-^

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

This story has a good concept (: 

But....it was hard getting into. 

You need to go back and revise, like capitalizing character names and the beginning of the paragraphs . 

Believe it or not this will turn people away from your story, which is going good so far(: 

hoped I helped 

Oh ho, so who exactly was she escaping?  My intuition suggest this may not derive from the original story line.. no?  Could she perhap escaped slave traders, but I suppose that could work with the original story if she had been capture by them.... but she seem so determined to change her fate... what ever she has been running from exactly how will runing in to Sesshoumaru change her fate... or perhaps it will start it... bring for a proficy, or maybe it will start a war.. . Oh the possiblities... I am curious to see what you will have your favorite chacter act out next.

Nyuka

I am loving this story. Please keep it!

I honestly couldn't read all of the first chapter, you should revise it and capitalize letters when necessary. Other than that I liked the concept.

Lol then what happend, is there fighting, healing, does she collapse, does a scare demon enter behind her have traked her injured self neglecting to note the even bigger preditor (Sesshoumaru).  Keep up the good work the story has just begun and its has many revinues it may travel down.

Nyuka