Reviews for My Light by Maya

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KyraTekak (Chapter 12) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Love the story. 


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 12) - Sat 13 Dec 2014

Loved this is so different and interesting 

I'll adkit in the beginning I was like wha? Now I'm like omg what's going on lol  I want more !!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Fri 12 Dec 2014

Been months, I'm glad your back. Cool chapter, keep it coming Happy Belated Thanksgiving and a Merry Christmas


Via (Chapter 12) - Fri 12 Dec 2014

so happy that you are back!! Its been so long I had to reread the whole story all over again just to remember what story this was lol but i fell in love with it all over again <3 This chapter was awesome and I cannot wait for the next update! 


Eve (Chapter 11) - Sun 30 Mar 2014

Oh please send the next chapter!!!!

i so need more!

Love it!!!!!!!


consuelo marquez (Chapter 11) - Sun 30 Mar 2014

ooooooohhhhhh!!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Sat 29 Mar 2014

More, keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Sat 29 Mar 2014

Good, keep it coming.


tonya (Chapter 11) - Sat 29 Mar 2014

great chapter!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

Late but great, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!


Hassanah (Chapter 10) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

I love your story !! You do need a beta to go over your work as you have some spelling mistakes etc. If you fixed those problems it would be perfect but luckily you have a good writing style and can keep the readers entertained ! Good job, try and get a beta and please update soon ?


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sun 06 Oct 2013

Keep it coming. 


elizabeth (Chapter 5) - Sat 05 Oct 2013

grear  fascinated story me you´re very talented great story 


thumper (Chapter 7) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

'First she must prove her strength, this Sesshomaru wants a strong mate one that will give us a strong hair'

even though i know it is a grammatical error i still  thought the above was funny... next chapter please.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

Cool, keep it coming.


Black Phoenix (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

It's good so far, but I found a few things that kind of throws it off. It feels rushed and sketchy all throughout, a little awkward too. Jumping from one POV to another causes confusion so I'd recommend showing a breaking point or sticking to one POV. Also, you should definitely seperate your AN from the rest of your story. Other than that it's a great story and I look forward to its progression :)


Kachina (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013

Please update! 


consuelo marquez (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013

omg i love this!  please continue it!   at first i was confused because i thought that it followed the original anime plot line, but then i realized that it didnt.  anyway!  love it and please continue!


mari (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013

really like this story thanks.


mari (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013

really like this story thanks.


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