Loved this is so different and interesting
I'll adkit in the beginning I was like wha? Now I'm like omg what's going on lol I want more !!!
Been months, I'm glad your back. Cool chapter, keep it coming Happy Belated Thanksgiving and a Merry Christmas
Via (Chapter 12) - Fri 12 Dec 2014
so happy that you are back!! Its been so long I had to reread the whole story all over again just to remember what story this was lol but i fell in love with it all over again <3 This chapter was awesome and I cannot wait for the next update!
Eve (Chapter 11) - Sun 30 Mar 2014
Oh please send the next chapter!!!!
i so need more!
Love it!!!!!!!
ooooooohhhhhh!!!!
More, keep it coming.
Good, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 11) - Sat 29 Mar 2014
great chapter!
Late but great, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
I love your story !! You do need a beta to go over your work as you have some spelling mistakes etc. If you fixed those problems it would be perfect but luckily you have a good writing style and can keep the readers entertained ! Good job, try and get a beta and please update soon ?
Keep it coming.
grear fascinated story me you´re very talented great story
thumper (Chapter 7) - Fri 16 Aug 2013
'First she must prove her strength, this Sesshomaru wants a strong mate one that will give us a strong hair'
even though i know it is a grammatical error i still thought the above was funny... next chapter please.
Cool, keep it coming.
It's good so far, but I found a few things that kind of throws it off. It feels rushed and sketchy all throughout, a little awkward too. Jumping from one POV to another causes confusion so I'd recommend showing a breaking point or sticking to one POV. Also, you should definitely seperate your AN from the rest of your story. Other than that it's a great story and I look forward to its progression :)
Kachina (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
Please update!
omg i love this! please continue it! at first i was confused because i thought that it followed the original anime plot line, but then i realized that it didnt. anyway! love it and please continue!
mari (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
really like this story thanks.
mari (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
really like this story thanks.
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