Seriously? Just like that huh? How droll. Barely an apology. Forgiven just like that.
Both chapters are great, I'm glad Sesshomaru and Kagome are finally mated. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 17) - Sat 15 Jun 2013
omg this is getting good thanks.
Cliff hangeerrr! D= Update soon!!
SO FREAKING CUTE! MY TOES CURLED AND I SQUEALED AT THE CUTENESS HERE! Tonight we pass the rum around and sing songs of the good ol days! Tomorrow we prepare for more!
mari (Chapter 16) - Thu 13 Jun 2013
so loving perfect.
This chapter was sweet!!! Keep it coming.
Midian (Chapter 15) - Wed 12 Jun 2013
Keep up the good work.
This chapter was sweet. You made a little mistake you wrote Sesshomaru blushed madly and turned away from him, it should be Sesshomaru blushed madly and turned away from her or if you meant Kagome it would be Kagome blushed madly and turned away from him.
This left me with giggles! I can't wait for the next chapter heheeheheheheheheheheheheheeeeee
I like it! There's some grammar mistakes, but they seem to be improving as the story progresses. It's a very unique and interesting storyline! Update soon :)
I like where this is headed. Nicely written chapter, by the way. Keep it coming!
mari (Chapter 15) - Mon 10 Jun 2013
perfect update.
Keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 14) - Sun 09 Jun 2013
thanks loved it .
Midian (Chapter 14) - Sun 09 Jun 2013
Poor fox got his ass beat.
Keep up the good work
A very amusing chapter. I can't wait for our favourite couples to get together. Keep it coming and nicely done!
All three chapters are great, I can't wait for Sesshomaru to ask Kagome to be his mate, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 13) - Thu 06 Jun 2013
loved the update.
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