Loving all, keep it coming.
Great new chapters.
It'll be interesting to see how the humans react to him and what happens next.
This last chapter did have a few errors where you left out a word or two, or added extras. It's minor and I knew what you meant. You've posted alot of chapters today so it's to be expected.
I think it's neat how you changed from day time in his era to night time in the future. Did the battle take that long or is it an unexpected twist of the time traveling?
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
I don't doubt that Sesshoumaru will get out of this without much trouble, but I'm wondering if he'll be able to travel back and forth through the well the way Kagome could.
I look forward to seeing what the dark thing in the well is.
Great story so far, I can't wait for more!
~Starfyre
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Wow! This is a really interesting idea!
I never would have thought of reversing the roles of who gets pulled into the well and sent through time!
I look forward to more of this very intriguing plot!
~Starfyre
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