Reviews for The Guardian by MissLibra

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Starfyre (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 Jun 2013

Well, that was a bomb shell. lol.

Now I'm wondering if he's dead because he disappeared or if he's dead because he was killed in the battle with the humans?

I'm also curious as to how InuYasha is no longer pinned to the tree if Kagome didn't free him.

This was a great chapter! I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


LM Bluejay (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 Jun 2013

Very nice! I'm loving the story so far! :)


LM Bluejay (Chapter 6) - Sun 02 Jun 2013

Well that's got to be awkward. lol


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 Jun 2013

All five chapters are great, keep it coming.


Neelixonee (Chapter 21) - Sun 02 Jun 2013

:D  I'm excited for more!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

All six chapters are great, keep it coming.


Stella Mira (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

I would go with the handsome demon for now if I were in her place. xD

Nice use of the prompt here! :)

Hm, as far as Japanese terms go, you have made a few spelling mistakes. A demonic aura/energy is called a youki/yoki. Tetsusaiga/Tessaiga and Tenseiga are the acceptable terms for the swords. Hope this helps. ^^


Stella Mira (Chapter 7) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

I cannot argue that he does look like he came right out of a fairytale. xD

Your reversed plot is an interesting idea. The characters do seem to be portrayed aptly so far as well. Your overall grammar, punctuation, vocabulary e.t.c. are at a good level; if you exclude some tiny mistakes we all make from time to time. I'd say you have a good story on your hands. Keep it up! :)

I enjoyed this chapter! Though, you don't have to use the month's theme as a prompt; only the four prompts below the theme. Great first entry though. I'll be reading on! :)


Safa Hujurat (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

AHHHHHH!!!! i love this!!!


Starfyre (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

These are highly intriguing updates!

The phone conversation with the unnamed people was interesting. I wonder if one to those people was InuYasha. I'm also curious if one is Shippo.

There are so many questions now. I can't wait for more!

~Starfyre


LadyGoshawk (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

A terribly interesting turnabout! Can't wait to see where it goes!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Fri 31 May 2013

All three chapters are great, keep it coming.


Safa Hujurat (Chapter 12) - Fri 31 May 2013

OH I love this story!! this should have been the original Inuyasha storyline!! i can't wait for the next update, please hrry:))))


Starfyre (Chapter 12) - Fri 31 May 2013

That was a totally awesome battle scene!

I'm so excited to see what you post next! I really like this story a lot and you are very talented with writing thrilling scenes. Great work!

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


Starfyre (Chapter 10) - Fri 31 May 2013

I'm squirming in my seat! I can't wait to see the rest of the battle!

It's sure to make a mess of the shrine grounds though. :(

I wonder how Kagome will explain the broken tree to her family! :S

Great Update!

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


Midian (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 May 2013

I like it keep up the good work


Kaitlyn (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 May 2013

Sessho is like, 5'11....


Starfyre (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 May 2013

Wow! Great chapters!

I love how you introduced them! Sesshoumaru is very true to the character, as is Kagome.

I'm curious to why Kagome's power is sealed.

I'm wondering if they are going to end up hunting this new evil all over modern Japan.

It'll be interesting to see how her family reacts to this new chain of events as well.

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 May 2013

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.


Tana_san (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 May 2013

This is becoming very interesting. I'll be looking for more. It's quite a twist having Mistress Centepede pull Sesshoumaru into the future. I'd think I'd prefer this better as a chapter fic though. You are following a straight storyline pattern it seems and no offense but for those stuck with dail up internet, it makes the reading easier. Anyway, that's your choice. I also would like to make one correction since I don't bother over typos and missed words, etc....but Sesshoumaru's sword is called Tensiega, the sword of the Heavens, not Tetsusaiga, InuYasha's sword that can kill thousands with one strike. I'm very impressed with how Sesshoumaru is so in character and your writing style is exceptional.  JEN


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