Well, that was a bomb shell. lol.
Now I'm wondering if he's dead because he disappeared or if he's dead because he was killed in the battle with the humans?
I'm also curious as to how InuYasha is no longer pinned to the tree if Kagome didn't free him.
This was a great chapter! I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Very nice! I'm loving the story so far! :)
Well that's got to be awkward. lol
All five chapters are great, keep it coming.
:D I'm excited for more!
All six chapters are great, keep it coming.
I would go with the handsome demon for now if I were in her place. xD
Nice use of the prompt here! :)
Hm, as far as Japanese terms go, you have made a few spelling mistakes. A demonic aura/energy is called a youki/yoki. Tetsusaiga/Tessaiga and Tenseiga are the acceptable terms for the swords. Hope this helps. ^^
I cannot argue that he does look like he came right out of a fairytale. xD
Your reversed plot is an interesting idea. The characters do seem to be portrayed aptly so far as well. Your overall grammar, punctuation, vocabulary e.t.c. are at a good level; if you exclude some tiny mistakes we all make from time to time. I'd say you have a good story on your hands. Keep it up! :)
I enjoyed this chapter! Though, you don't have to use the month's theme as a prompt; only the four prompts below the theme. Great first entry though. I'll be reading on! :)
AHHHHHH!!!! i love this!!!
These are highly intriguing updates!
The phone conversation with the unnamed people was interesting. I wonder if one to those people was InuYasha. I'm also curious if one is Shippo.
There are so many questions now. I can't wait for more!
~Starfyre
A terribly interesting turnabout! Can't wait to see where it goes!
All three chapters are great, keep it coming.
OH I love this story!! this should have been the original Inuyasha storyline!! i can't wait for the next update, please hrry:))))
That was a totally awesome battle scene!
I'm so excited to see what you post next! I really like this story a lot and you are very talented with writing thrilling scenes. Great work!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
I'm squirming in my seat! I can't wait to see the rest of the battle!
It's sure to make a mess of the shrine grounds though. :(
I wonder how Kagome will explain the broken tree to her family! :S
Great Update!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Midian (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 May 2013
I like it keep up the good work
Kaitlyn (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 May 2013
Sessho is like, 5'11....
Wow! Great chapters!
I love how you introduced them! Sesshoumaru is very true to the character, as is Kagome.
I'm curious to why Kagome's power is sealed.
I'm wondering if they are going to end up hunting this new evil all over modern Japan.
It'll be interesting to see how her family reacts to this new chain of events as well.
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
This is becoming very interesting. I'll be looking for more. It's quite a twist having Mistress Centepede pull Sesshoumaru into the future. I'd think I'd prefer this better as a chapter fic though. You are following a straight storyline pattern it seems and no offense but for those stuck with dail up internet, it makes the reading easier. Anyway, that's your choice. I also would like to make one correction since I don't bother over typos and missed words, etc....but Sesshoumaru's sword is called Tensiega, the sword of the Heavens, not Tetsusaiga, InuYasha's sword that can kill thousands with one strike. I'm very impressed with how Sesshoumaru is so in character and your writing style is exceptional. JEN
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