Great chapter, I look forward to the next one and can't wait to see more of Absolutions Pursuit.
Hesunohana (Chapter 52) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
I love your fanfiction !! really. the characters are well-described, I think, and the plot interesting.
I really wish you'd reconsider retiring. You are truly too great a writer to just vanish from all of our lives. I would wait an eternity for a chapter or a new tale, if it meant that you'd still be around.
taixi (Chapter 52) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
your writing is lovely and I do hope you find the motivation to finish this story. will be sad to see you retire from writing but I can certainly understand why you might decide you need to do so - however, it would be a shame to leave such a well-crafted story unfinished! (and absolution's pursuit, as well) ~~~~ sending you virtual motivational waves ~~~~
Jordan (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
This is seriously my favorite fanfiction on this site! I am always so excited to see new updates. I forgive you for your lateness; that stupid real life gets in the way sometimes!
darkangel05 (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
First of all don't even think of retiring from writing. You have a great talent going here and Im sure that others appreciate the fact that you're sharing this said talent with us. I really do hope you reconsider. Anyways this was a great chapter to read. I love the little moments shared between Sesshoumaru and Kagome even though they don't lead to anything. But I think that's what makes it interesting, to see the relationship develop into something more. The whole process of getting there I should say. Thank you and I really cant wait for the next chapter to come out. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Anonymous (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
so happy u updated keep them coming plz loven it
Amber (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
I just want to let you know that I LOVE this story! I had such a craptastic day today and when I saw that you had updated, I was soooo excited. So thank you for improving my mood immensely.
:)
Can't wait for the next one!!!
It was so wonderful seeing the update! Keep up the great work. Your muse was working just fine...:)
Kanna37 (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
I'd wondered what happened to you! And boy, do I understand the whole missing muse thing - writer's block is no joke. I'm glad that you inted to at least finish your stories before giving up the good fight, though, it leaves something or your fans to look forwards to!
Amber
I'm so glad that you update, I was thinking that you had abandon this story. I hope that you finish it, is a great story!!!
mary (Chapter 52) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
yeah i kinda forgot about this one. it's so sad that you'll retire. really? you won't return,ever?
Craftysparrow (Chapter 51) - Mon 22 Feb 2010
WOW!! Great Story! I just finished reading all 51 chapters straight ( I have a lot of free time right now ). Your characterization is wonderful, I really appreciated the depth and sincerity that you brought to all of the cast. I especially like your portrayl of Kikyou, she is very realistic, you can sympathize and empathize with her. I love how the storylines connect and keep you wondering whats going to happen next. I'll be really really excited to see this story updated! Phenomenal job!!!
rainwitch (Chapter 21) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
I have been reading your story and am enjoying it very much. Your character development is outstanding and the story line is facinating. Any story that stirs an emotion is a great read for me. I have cried and laughed at various parts and look forward to what is to come next. Keep up the great work, you are very talented. Thank you for your talent and sharing your gift with us.
P.S. That last review on here that I left was ment for this chapter. Not sure why it showed up as chap. 1. LOL!!!
darkangel05 (Chapter 51) - Wed 03 Feb 2010
Wow! I really loved the part where Sesshouamru and Kagome had there one on one time with each other in the forest. I really loved there conversations about feelings and how Sesshoumaru told Kagome of his past ideals and how he has changed them. Just goes to show that even the most immovable stone can be budged. I want to thank you for giving us this update and cant wait to see another chapter soon. On that note, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Good chapter! I liked the way you expressed Sesshomarus growing attatchment, it fit him well. And I was wondering when the dragon would make his presence a bit more known. I can't wait for the next chapter! Maybe there will be some citrus? :D
Oh hell!
As always Miss Sianna, beautifully done. Bravo! I believe what I enjoy most about your work, is the literary flow. There is always hints leading up to certain events, but they are just vague enough that you have no idea at what you are hinting, until it happens. It keeps everything orderly, and well thought, but maintains suspence - which is hard for a lot of authors to accomplish. I personally believe you have kept the personalities very well, in character. Sesshomaru, is obviously different than normal, but there has been enough dialogue, and inner monologue to explain those changes, and nothing is outwardly drastic. They are all foreseeable, of his personality. It is hard to make the emotionless Lord, more carporial to the readers, without some slight change in character, which is inherent to being privy to inner monologue - which as readers, we expect, and look forward to. Somehow, you have pulled it off though. You've made him tangable and yet he is still the same Sesshomaru we all have wet dreams over ;) THANK you for coming back to us, and continuing this work. I cannot say enough good about it. I wait with baited breath for update. Kisses to you my dear!
Rachael (Chapter 50) - Sun 10 Jan 2010
Oh my god i am in love with your story!!! Your character development is amazing, i can actually see this playing out in the actual series. I also like Peng-san. He is a scrumptious character ^.- You should totally bring him into your story again before it comes to an end. i love you and please continue with updates you are doing a great job ^.^
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