Oh, no fair! Cliffie!!!! I am now going to go sulk - it was just getting good...
Amber
darkangel05 (Chapter 46) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
Hmm... i wonder why Naraku's scent is all over the place and what kind of challenges will the team have to face going through those mountains? And what will Sesshoumaru say or do to persuade Kagome to stay in the past? the next chapter should prove interesting. Thank you for this chapter and I hope you UPDATE SOON!
(Chapter 46) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
Great chapter, I like the mountain barrier and it's effects, a very nifty twist. Also good work on how Sesshoumaru's feeling are slowly growing for Kagome, plus how she acts around him. Looking forward to see what you come up with next.
Wispr
Kanna37 (Chapter 46) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
OoO! Your'e doing a doujinshi? Have you published it yet? When you do, I'd love to know! Anyway, thanks for a new chapter, very entertaining and enjoyable story!
Amber
Ellen (Chapter 45) - Sat 07 Nov 2009
I happened upon this story by accident yesterday. So far, it's been the accident this year.
You are a gifted writer. I love the way you portray the characters, particularaly Sess. Mushy-gooey doesn't suit him, and you're one of the few authors who understands this.
Anyways, wonderful job. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter!
-Ellen
darkangel05 (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2009
I really hope you decide to update soon. I am really looking forward to the next chapter of this very captivating story. Please dont forget about us.
(Chapter 45) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
I like how you wrote the talk between Kagome and Sesshoumaru... very touching.
Wispr
(Chapter 44) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Oh wow Kagome is making a mistake... can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru reacts to her going home plans.
Wispr
(Chapter 43) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Well I guess you can say Kagome was saved by the Shikigami! Great chapter and the foreplay scene was very tastefully done!
Wispr
(Chapter 42) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Oh you had me laughing out loud several times through this chapter... great work and I love both disrobing scenes!
Wispr
(Chapter 41) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Again breathtaking visuals... you really have written all of the characters personalities spot on. Plus I love Kagome's Shikigami and Sesshoumaru's reaction to it/her.
Wispr
(Chapter 40) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Now that was a freaking awesome chapter, wonderful work with the visuals about both the caves and the creatures within. Love how you got across the creepyness of the spider demons.
Wispr
(Chapter 39) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Great scene with Kagome watching Sesshoumaru. The flashlight scene was bloody funny... great work!
Wispr
(Chapter 38) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
The hunt scene was beautifully details and vivid... the writing of the two of them doing the killing blow created such a mind blowing image you had me on the edge of my seat.
Wispr
(Chapter 37) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Fantastic girl talk chapter... like the bit about Sesshoumaru's wording of what he promised Kagome. Also like seeing him and Inuyasha kind of bonding... kind of... ;)
Wispr
(Chapter 36) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Great chapter, really like Kikyou's conversation with Inuyasha and that Sesshoumaru overhearing creating the little scene between him and Kagome. Looking forward to see how Kagome handles the twenty qeustions!
Wispr
(Chapter 35) - Thu 29 Oct 2009
Wonderful chapter... love the sleepover scene and everyones reactions the next day.
Wispr
(Chapter 34) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
Oh Goddess them getting ready for bed was so bloody funny and cute. Outstanding writing there!
Wispr
(Chapter 33) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
Oh bloody hell the ending was awesome and wonderfully done... simply love your writing style.
Wispr
(Chapter 32) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
Wonderful work on Sesshouaru's inner thoughts... you really got his personality down pat.
Wispr
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