It's absolutely wonderful to see an update - I've been waiting with so much excitement! I understand about the lack of enthusaism for writing, though - I myself have stumbled into that gray area. Hopefully, things will pick up for you soon...
You made us wait FOREVER! How could you?!
Oh, well. Though the demon tree people story was kind of interesting, I didn't really get a whole lot out of this. It was written well, don't get me wrong! It just seemed a bit more of a filler chapter than anything to me. I don't know- maybe I'm just tired.
Can't wait for the next installment! PLEASE try to update more often! I love this story!
TKE (Chapter 53) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
YAH....a new chapter, can't wait for the next!!
Spennig (Chapter 52) - Thu 13 May 2010
I like the interaction in this, and how they are dancing around the edges of nerves and desire.
I hope to see more writing!
Kanna37 (Chapter 52) - Tue 11 May 2010
Okay, sending encouraging words - I'm really in love with this story - and your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. It lies so closely alongside how I see him. I understand hwo it is to fight with the muse about things, as I have been doing that with Malice, so I don't want to pressure you, I just wanted to remind you that you do have fans out there and we would all be very grateful for whatever more we can get!
Amber
Kas (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 May 2010
Hello! Just wanted to say Thank You! for an amazing fic! I do believe that your writing improved as the story progressed. Not that it was bad, just saying it's even more amazing! :} I cannot wait for the next update! And I would totally leave a writers critique or something like that if I was a writer...but I am not. But from my mundane reader pov it was awesome and I ejoyed it very much. Thanks again and looking foward to the next installment! <3<3<3
Man, I love this story! It's so great! And I can't believe you're retiring. That blows cuz I think you rock at writing. Keep up the good work!
hola (Chapter 52) - Wed 31 Mar 2010
*sigh* so, i was totally dreading the day that i would get to chapter 52, and yet i couldnt wait to read it. now i guess i'll just impatiently wait for your muse to come back!
a few things i wanna say.. first, i love that kagome's shikigami is a mini her! and the stripes that appeared for just a second-- so cool! i was literally thinking today, that this is a perfect fanfiction. jus perfect. great pace, the way you write, everything. also, i love wei-peng and tsunjin. :o)
anyways, just trying to show my appreciation. ^^
your newest fan,
jenis
Lexie (Chapter 52) - Mon 29 Mar 2010
i have spent the past week reading this story in my spare time and i have to say i am completely entralled by the plot and storyline. this is amazing and i sincerely hope your muse decides to behave and allow you to write instead of being a bitch.
please update when you can!!
hola (Chapter 33) - Mon 29 Mar 2010
aw!!!!!!! yay!!! their first kiss! *le sigh* :o)
hola (Chapter 31) - Mon 29 Mar 2010
p.s. i meant to say retire, not ''rr''. lol. i cant type apparently. :P
hola (Chapter 31) - Mon 29 Mar 2010
i smell an adventure!! :) also, i never knew what the 'seiza' position was called!! thanks for that. and thanks for writing this story. i dont know if you'll ever read this, but you're a great writer.
i'm having so much fun reading this. i have honestly been searching for a fic where kagome has a few regular days, and isnt CONSTANTLY go-go-go-go!!! i enjoy, and revel in the calm, every day life bits of stories.
please, please, please dont rr. :(
Jane (Chapter 52) - Sun 28 Mar 2010
I could never believe that your muse was anywhere distant from you when writing any chapter of this story! It is maginificent! I seriously read all 52 chapters in two hours! This story is incredibly original and so interesting! I love how the characters of Kagome and Sesshoumaru stay true to themselves. It's their execution that I believe makes the story so great!
My only request would be that Inuyasha care just a little more about Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship. I understand that he's trying to let go and recognizes his commitment to Kikyou but, I think that Inuyasha could only really take so much. He is still in love with Kagome and I'm almost looking forward to the proverbial straw that will break the camel's back and really set him over the edge concerning Kagome and Sesshoumaru's growing adoration for one another.
But, you are doing a fantastic job with his character now! I think it's still great! You are very talented and I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
PLEASE update soon!
hola (Chapter 19) - Sat 27 Mar 2010
ugh..... i bawled like a little baby!!! er, big baby. man. that was a tough chapter. :o(
hola (Chapter 10) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
nooooooooo!!!!!! oh my goodness, i cant believe sesshoumaru just walked away like that! grrrr....
anyways, gosh. that battle scene was CRAZY. probably the best i've read. :o) Also, its super refreshing to have someone give naraku a regret. never seen that in any story i've read. great work! imma keep reading and revewing.
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I'm always inspired by your writing style, and literary flow. It makes me want to write too, but sadly I lack your tallent! Its truly sad to me to think of loosing you as a writer here on dokuga, but I do hope you will stick it out and finish your stories. I find myself quite additcted! No matter your reasons for wanting to stop writing, I hope that you will continue to do so, for your own personal pleasure. It would truly be tragic for you not to continue your tallents, even if no one but yourself reads them.
As for your story - You'd never know that you felt uninspired with this chapter. I thought it was very well written, and gave some important insights into the role of the dragon. The fluff with Sesshomaru and Kagome was of course, very appreciated as well! I look forward to more.
hola (Chapter 6) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
I'm really enjoying this story! Not like i'm suprised or anything :P
Man, if she gives him that dang amulet, imma be sooo mad. lol. Onward to chapter 7!!
hola (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
Wow. Great first chapter. :o) I'm a big fan of long stories, so I cant wait to read the rest!!
Chiri (Chapter 52) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
I luv this story! I love the fact that there's an actual relatively slow pace at which Sess and Kag grow affectionate towards each other, and I really love the story all together! Please update as soon as you can and great job with the writing!
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