Great chapter, I like how Sesshoumaru admitted to himself Kagome's wearfare is importan to him. Great visuals on Kagome entering the hidden barrior.

Wispr

Yay! A new character!  I really like Wei-Peng.  The many facets of his personality is wonderful.  I do hope you continue writing him into the rest of this fic.  You know..like maybe a new love interest for Kagome...to get Sesshy all jealous and possessive..hehehehe!  Anyhoo, keep up the great writing.  This is getting more and more interesting...

Peng is a very entertaining and interesting character.  I wouldn't mind seeing more of him...Oooooh, he could become a contender for Kagome's affections!  LOL  That sure would stir things up, and with his sense of humor, it could be fun--as long as Sess doesn't kill him.  LOL  This was a fun, interesting, and intriguing chapter.  You left me wondering whether or not they would get back through the portal in time.  ^_^  Cliffy!

Hiya! That was a great chapter!  I like that the story is flowing and I like how you wrote the connection that Kagome has with the keys, it will make it very interesting when searching for the other ones.  In regards to your inquiry about Peng! LOVE HIM!  I hope that we won't see the last of him when Kagome leaves his mountain.  I think the potential for a slight love triangle or tension between Peng, Kagome and Sesshoumaru is definately there.  I hope we will see more of him because he is a VERY interesting character, I like him!  Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapter. Take care!

Loved this chapter, the characters and the length of it. The waiting period was extremely worth it. I love your new character peng. He's full of diferent emtions that come and go so fast tht its hard to detect which is which. Just wanted to say keep up the good work and dont wait so long to update. having said that UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

Haha!! Peng was wonderful. I really like him. Hopefully we get some more of him in the next chapter!! I want to see fluffy's reaction to him... :) and of course his reaction to fluffy... hehe

Personally, I think that kind of thing is interesting - personality wise, I mean, which is why I made Nyoko in IDTMAYDIL.  She's spastic at times.  Kind of like me.  Anyway, good chapter!

Amber

I really like this story.  :D  Can't wait to see what happens next!  Keep up the spectacular work!  Love your writing.  lol

--Anna

i dont review till ive read all that i can and i have to say this is geting really really really really good i hope you post more chapters soon so i can find out whats going to happen i cant wait

Very good chapter! I was actually chewings my nails while reading. Thank you for the wonderful update :)

Brilliant! Bravo! I love this story it's incredibly creative and sooo well rounded its better than swiss chocolate. I now say a tad, for the bird might be a lad, fluffy will be mad, and kagome will need a pad...  :)

Yay!  An update!  Wow, Kagome is having a harrowing experience.  It's so sad.  I wonder what form the bird is going  to take.  This is so intriguing.  Thanks so much for updating.  Great description on her breaking the barrier.

As always, you keep me hanging by the endge of my seat.

Yaaaaaaaaaaynesssssss! new chapter. Humm can't wait to see what the bird transforms into.

Damn miko is so strong that she doesn't even need an Adamant Barrage to bust through something that could have potentially killed her. Sess is probably having a wicked cow about now

I just wanted to say you are a talented writer.  I look forward to many more posts.  Please keep up the great work.

Great Chapter! How did Kagome just disappear? And who or what was calling her? Can't wait to read what happens next! Please update again soon! :)

oh cool an albatross, this should be interesting, can't wait

Awesome chapter but why did it have to be so short? I wonder what all the youkai, the bird released, is about. I think the bird or should I say albatross is just a guardian of the key. Meant to gurad it from undeserving arrivals. Anyways thank you for this much needed update and UPDATE SOON!!!

Hmmm...

God save thee, ancient Mariner!
From the fiends, that plague thee thus!
Why look'st thou so?' With my cross-bow
I shot the albatross.

I'm happy to see your update. You're driving me nuts with the cliffhanger endings - not necessarily in a bad way -You certainly know how to keep me coming back for more!