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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Sun 05 May 2013

Keep it coming.


Faux66 (Chapter 10) - Sun 05 May 2013

Eeeeiiiiiii I'm really liking this story!!! The talking car is amazing


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sun 05 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 9) - Sun 05 May 2013

thanks loved it like always.


mari (Chapter 8) - Sun 05 May 2013

loved it thanks.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Sat 04 May 2013

Keep it coming.


D (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 May 2013

Omg Great story,love the dark Kagome. I mean LOVE IT. But why does she have to tell him sooon, or why does he butt in soon? Why did she let him into his sercets so soon? Are you plan on making this a short story? Idk it just seems like the story doesnt have enough to simmer. Its good and I love the story idea but i think its moving to fast. I dont feel like she would have so "willing" given him answers the way she did or her friend. I guess I thought this would go differently then most other stories like this. I miss the drama and little bit of waiting and fighting between the two. Alot people story seem to be lacking that alot and just getting staright to them becoming close. I thought you story would have the simmer factor  but yeah as i said i do love dark kagome and the its a goood story. Thanks for writting and keep it up. I look forward to more of your work and the rest of the story.


*~*Missy*~* (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 May 2013

i really enjoy this and it is very different.  However i would caution you to be sure you look at your sentences after you finish dialogue like "she said tiredly" or whatever like that i noticed some errors mostly just stuff a beta could catch for you.  But i loved it and hope to see more soon :)

 

=Mistress=


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 May 2013

thanks for the update loved it.


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 May 2013

Very nice chapter, please update soon....I will be waiting! =]


mari (Chapter 6) - Fri 03 May 2013

LOVED it thanks.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Fri 03 May 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 May 2013

love this story.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 May 2013

Great story, keep it coming.


Midian (Chapter 2) - Thu 02 May 2013

I think the origonal knight rider can only be a Trans am


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