Yikes thisis definitely an emotional story! I LOVE IT SOO MUCH THOUGH.
I enjoyed the interactions and how you didnt just allow Kagome to fall into Sesshoumarus arms so suddenly. I am eager to see how she overcomes the death of Ronin:) He is such the good guy Im terribly sad he had to die...
Great JOB
Cant wait for the next installment!
Both chapters arw good, keep it coming.
Debra (Chapter 10) - Fri 17 Oct 2014
Good update and Kagome is obviously going through the anger part of the lose process. Poor Kagome.
rose (Chapter 10) - Thu 16 Oct 2014
next chapter please
Very nice story and nicely written. Where is the location of the story because it has me thrown off a bit? Kagome working for Shikon No Tama Tokoyo Gazette and family living on a shrine and then her fiance's body being brought back under the cover of the American flag.
rose (Chapter 9) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
next chapter please
Debra (Chapter 9) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
Good chapter. Hope the next one comes out soon. I also really liked that Miroku and Sango didn't really press for info on her and InuYasha. She needs to deal with the lose of Ronin not add exstra stress in dealing with rape and a miscarage.
Wow this story hits home is some ways to me my father was a army vet. its good to be an honored hero.
Sad, keep it coming
rose (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
next chapter please
Debra (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
Wow you weren'to joking about tear jerker. That was so sad, but I'm glad you made her Ronin a grest guy that died and didn't cheat on her. Far to many stories where her guy cheats. This was good because we get to see how Sesshoumaru is trying to be there for her.
I hope you update soon.
No Uta (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
My goodness... I'm actually choked up. The part with Kagome's, fiance ' s canine partner, it definitely tugged at my heartstrings. This is very well written. Wow...this was intense. Well done! I'm a definite fan of yours.
No Uta (Chapter 7) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
Poor poor Kagome. How very sad. She's already been through so much.
No Uta (Chapter 6) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
Oh...no..Kagome's fiance. :(
No Uta (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 Oct 2014
Oh...my...gawd... Sesshomaru and the bulge...in...his..pants...have mercy!
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