Just wow this really well writen and i would love to see more like it.

I liked it as well! Nice work!

LOL! Inuyasha is shrimpy!! Sesshomaru was bloated with pleasure, and Kagome yelled so loud he got queasy. 

SUCCESS AND VICTORY TO YOU! 

This was crazy and funny!

I demand you make more of this! Like him having to figure out that he wants ONLY her, even as mother to his pups, and then some how keeping her safe and well until he's old enough to make her have his babies!

Arr! I'm displeased! I was really looking forward to horrible, terrible smut, but this wasn't horrible in any way. I really thought bloated would be really hard to incorporate, but you did it. I want to cry! )=!

Must come up with even harder words to use! Kudos! That was awesome!

OMG.....*gasp*....can't breath laughing too hard.....*gasp*......Inuyasha was soooo put in his place, wonder if he actually stuck around to watch or not? I loved every bit of this. Well Done Lyra!!

Hahaha. This made me laugh at first! But, all that smut! Hmmm <3

Bahahahahahahaha!! Excellent!! That you managed to use all of the words is a feat in itself, but beyond that....this was SMUTASTIC!!!! <3333