What a facinating idea! A very interesting chapter. I wonder what will happen while she's inside the sacred tree, and I wonder what the others will think when they find her missing and her clothes at the bottom of the well.
Great update!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Thanks, starfyre I'll correct them immediately! That is a great idea, at least it'll make my poor first chapter a little longer in appearance :) thanks for the review! :)
So far it sounds like the beginning of a really great story. There are a few minor errors that you might want to correct, like capitalization of I. I would recommend that you break up that last paragraph into several, or at least into two seperate ones.
The plot is good, and I look forward to where you will take this in the future.
Hope it helps for what it's worth!
:)
~Starfyre