This is a great story! I can't wait for the next update. I'm positive that it will be a great surprise. I eagerly anticipated reading more in the future.
Great start but as the story goes on to chapter 11 and 12, there's a lot of quotes and confusing to know who exactly is speaking. Other than that, it's great.
This story is interesting yet confusing....it seems to be building to a point and then lingers...I'll check back in soon.
Cant wait for the next chapter! I would love to see the reactions of the grp if kikyo were to try to obsorb a yokai, maybe shippo
It's nice to finally read an update from you!
Anyway... where is she going to? I don't think she's going to Sesshoumaru, since he travels together with Inuyasha.
I'm curious!
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming
Eliona (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Aug 2014
I like Kagome's transformation, very excited to see the details unravel more about her changes ^-^
rose (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Aug 2014
next chapter please
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming
Megan (Chapter 13) - Thu 07 Aug 2014
yeah! Your back...looking forward to more chapters. :)
Update soon please!!!!!
Nice, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
rose (Chapter 13) - Wed 21 May 2014
next chapter please
Late but so good, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
So late, great chapters, keep it coming.
Serena (Chapter 8) - Tue 27 Aug 2013
your poetry is amazing! i absolutely loves sesshomaru's piece (heheh you cannot deny that its his :)) i love an author who is well rounded in writing styles, keep up the good work!
More, keep it coming.
Glad your back, keep it coming.
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