I love Miroku's character, he's so easily written :). Hachi's exasperation with him was well written.
I like how you've made Kikyo older in this. And the dream/vision Kagome has is interesting. What vengeance is spoken of?
So many questions, I hope they can be answered as the story continues.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
This makes me wonder as to who the merman is...something tells me I'll be waiting for his identity to be revealed for a bit.
Love the descriptions!
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
What an interesting beginning! Warning: I will be reviewing for all chapters, and likely in a short time, haha, I confess I read ridiculously quick.
Kessa
Hey!
Just thought I would leave a quick message! Your story is very well written and structured. I can't wait for the next installments!
Lol I love it! Keep up the good work and please update soon~!
Loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Well Kagome gave into the idea of becoming a mermaid quite easily. I wonder what everybody will think of that or if they will let her go once they get her back. I can't wait to see what happens next and her talk with Inuyasha :)
xinyi (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Love the story! Keep it coming!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
I feel kind of stupid to say this, but every time I see you've updated, I smile like an idiot and everyone around me stares like I'm crazy. I don't care, reading everything you write is totally worth it!
Keep it coming.
oh my gosh!!!! At first when I dread the description I was skeptical and now, now I am completely addicted! I totally thought that the western prince was sesshomaru and that he was going to have to fight with the mermen for kagome. And now this!!!! Holy crow! I'm so excited for the next chapter! I wonder what's going to happen when she returns!!! Oh my gosh I see sesshoumaru be a tad bit over protective when that happens!!! I can't wait! Looking forward to another update!
tina (Chapter 33) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
I want to take a bath like this one every dayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.................... this fic it is absolutly perfect... keep going...pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................
I love the slow, unhurried passion you have building between these two. And the scenes you create...good Lord! Keep it coming!
that was so exciting!! my husbands going to enkoy tonight! i'll thank you for him! keep going! i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
An other hot one, keep it coming.
Loveyaa (Chapter 32) - Mon 18 Mar 2013
Well they got down and dirty, while the down and dirty got them something. Poor Inuyasha, can't get a break. I wonder if Kagome will get to meet him and become friends with him. I can't wait to see what happens next and how she'll deal with all the questions when she is returned :) thanks for keeping up all the hard work all this time!
ah, finally an appearance from inuyasha! Great lemon, and awesome congrats on 1 month. I highly commend you for posting everyday! keep it up
Tricia (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Mar 2013
Wonderful story! Happy 1 month. I look forward to reading more.
Some corrections : ^_^
- thought as he search for the requested items >>> thought as he searched for the requested items
And awww, Sesshou is so mean to Inu!! Bad, bad boy!
~Voracious
Inuyasha as a fish, good one for making Inuyasha as a fish. Keep it coming.
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