I will admit that I expected more of a fight from Kagome about her issues because of how worked up she was. I would have wanted a bit more of a reassurance. BUT!! Splendid chapter! Keep it coming.
Ah ah ah!! l looooveee this story!! like absolutely love love!!! love the twist, love Sesshoumaru's character! love! and ooh the limes! they were so well written anticipating the lemon!! but iii also love the wait, it makes the story s much more... interesting? lol keeps my attention! ii wait for you to update! ssorry mistakes and of "ii"s is cuz using my phone to review ans its just being abitch and not writing properly! gosh ii wanted to say more but its annoying me! ii will write aother review come the nw chapter! update sn pleaaaase x
Kessa (Chapter 36) - Thu 21 Mar 2013
Nice :D. It always does the feminine ego good to scare your male with your authority at times.
Glad that's cleared up between them. Looking forwards to the next chapter.
Kessa
Keep it coming.
overall i enjoyed it :)
Wo0t another update! Love it!!! Also found two mistakes in the bottom paragraph. I put a ? next to the words.
His small ? shifted to a devious smirk. If only he knew what his absent minded words before he left her had done, maybe he would be more prepared for what he found we ? he left the water. If only.
Loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Well I'm glad that you're going to be clearing up the whole common, half-blood/fish thing. I wonder what trouble he has unleashed with kagome for when he leaves the water. I can't wait to see what happens next and maybe Inuyasha getting a break :)
Kessa (Chapter 35) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Inuyasha and Koga just never seem to get along, no matter what.
Hmm, a plausible fight to come between Kagome and Sesshomaru due to his careless words? Hope not!
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 34) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Usually it's Kagome that imparts the knowledge of other countries and foreign animals. A nice change.
Hopefully Kagome will get the answers to her questions and not get hurt by Sesshomaru.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 33) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
I love how Sesshomaru and Kagome are being so intimate. :)
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 32) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Inuyasha is awesome in this!
Kessa
Eliona (Chapter 35) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Im a little confuesed by the new term 'common' otherwise all good :D excited to see Sesshomaru meet the wraith of Kagome! Lol, jk ^_^
Kessa (Chapter 31) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
"Use your hand". HAHAHAHA! Sesshomaru's reaction is priceless.
I love how he patiently explains things to her.
A nice bit of smut. Exactly what was needed.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 30) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Ohand happy belated one month to 'Blood in the Water'. :)
Kessa (Chapter 30) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Lovely Chapter. Kaede is awesome, and it's always good to lighten things with Miroku's wandering hand ;)
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 29) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
The info regarding the Shira youkai and the Umi and Inu youkai Kami is really interesting.
And the differences between the merfolk and fishfolk too-will we be getting a full description of the physical differences?
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 28) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
There's a lot of hatred in the western bloodline. I almost feel sorry for Umishi/Hideaki.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 27) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Ah HA! I knew it! Awesome, I'm glad I was right. Loved the descriptions given how he hunted and gathered food and other necessities for her.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 26) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Ah, and so Kagome is discovered gone. I like how you make mention of her disappearing like this before to tackle tribes of ogres and groups of dark priestesses.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 25) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Awesome. This couldn't have turned out better. Now, I'm pretty positive that our mysterious Mer prince is Sesshomaru, but I guess I'll know for sure if I keep reading. :)
Kessa
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