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KouseiJL (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

Hurray! Finally it is confirmed that the MerKing is Sesshoumaru! I'm glad to hear that you're filling a little better and I hope you are in top form quickly! 

    I'm really enjoying the bits of background and hints at further information to be divulged as you progress through the story. It's just enough of a taste to keep us hooked, but not so much as to give it away! I look forward to your next chapter and I hope your muse treats you well!

 

Kousei


Mrs_Sesshomaru (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

Alrighty then!  Okay so who is the ass-bag holding title as Western Daiyoukai?  Yay-ness :-) keep up the good work


xDori (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

.....what?! so the current western lord is an impostor??!!! ohmygahhh twisted plot. awesome awesome. update soon! 


Eroviaa hunter (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

AHHHHHH Finally we see who the MerKing is. I love it. and the plot thickens! I have read your story all in one sitting and I have to say jolly good job. jolly good how indeed! You had made something that was different from the other plots and that I greatly appericated. There is a depth to the characters that make them 3 dimensional and provoke emotion from the reader. Please please keep updating like you have. So many good stories fall into idleness and I hope the same does not happen to this one!


Zyren (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

I truly truly LOVE what you're doing with this story. And I'm so happy you update daily lol otherwise I might go crazy. I have been happy with everything, even the lack of detail on who is who up until this point. So I have one question, is it common knowledge that Merfolk can walk on two legs? Because the way I read this chapter Kagome saw his legs and she didn't even flinch. I feel like the villagers would be much more fearful of the Merfolk if they knew of this ability. Unless I misunderstood the warding along the beach and river. Even in Kagomes dream she alerted them to what i understood as the possibility of merfolk swimming through the mist. I always thought that was just to keep them from getting too close. Hmmmmm perhaps I'm over thinking everything I'm gonna go reread the whole story, don't mind me. I still love this. Happy Writing!!! 


Purp1ebabe (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

Haha yay! Good to finally know for sure that it's sesshoumaru.  Thank you for the quick updates :D


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

I was right along, I knew the merprince was Sesshomaru! I'm glad it's him, keep it coming.


Eliona (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

You know like  million fangirls died of happiness with this last chapter lol. Good to see our Sesshomaru (at least now with his name haha) <3


spexchik (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

yayay for the reveal. but then who is the western lord? hmmm thanks for the update despite being sick! feel better soon


megan (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

YES!!!!! The Merprince is Sesshoumaru!! *does a dance* That was an evil way to end the chapter though...Im on the edge of my seat!!!!! I need to know more!!! Haha


Winters_Snow (Chapter 27) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

You are great at dangling the carrot. ;) just enough information to tease but not enough to satisfy. Keep going!


Loveyaa (Chapter 26) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

Well lets see if their doubts are confirmed or not. One thing is for sure: when Kagome returns she will quite different. I can't wait to see what happens next and more moments between Kagome and the merprince before she is returned :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

I hope you feel better, Keep it coming.


Winters_Snow (Chapter 26) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

I am pleased to say that your sickness shows nowhere in your writing. At least to me it does not. It still flows and draws me back for more. Feel better soon!


Eliona (Chapter 26) - Tue 12 Mar 2013

I hope you are feeling better :) dont push yourself too hard! but Im also glad for the update (not gonna lie lol) XD *pats your noggin'* go get some rest!


taixi (Chapter 26) - Mon 11 Mar 2013

so Kaede's thoughts at the end of Ch. 26 (that Kagome would definitely be returning, if at all, as a Mer-Queen, not as a human) seem to contradict what was going through the Mer-King's mind at the end of Ch. 25 (when he went to provide for Kagome "until he returned her to her people.")  He has obviously claimed her as his intended, which would suggest he wants to turn her (claim her) sooner rather than later, but perhaps his plans to thwart the Western Lord require that Kagome be returned to the village as a human in order to create some kind of subterfuge. Hmm.

Also, I am assuming this is the case since you have been so sick, but I have noticed a number of typos in the past few chapters (which is unusual for your story - you may want to go back and proofread again when you're not feeling delirious with being sick!)  For example, in Ch. 26 you refer to Kagome holding "viduals" but based on the context, I presume you mean vigils?


Loveyaa (Chapter 25) - Mon 11 Mar 2013

A lot has happened and changed. She was being egged on both times (the past as a child and now as more of an adult). I wonder who the caster will turn out to be. Kagome's tune will change bout the merfolk, but I wonder if she will be able to tell everybody about it. I can't wait to see what happens next and how she becomes more acquainted with her intended :)


Mrs_Sesshomaru (Chapter 25) - Mon 11 Mar 2013

Hmmm... IDK about this Kags personality.  And a youkai, no matter how strong, being able to block reiki...?  It is the polar opposite of everything they are - traditionally speaking.  BUT this is the magic of fan fiction!! :-) so I eagerly await the next installment.


Haven (Chapter 25) - Mon 11 Mar 2013

Straight to the point. I really like that the Merprince came right out and told her about the tragic event that happened when she was younger.  I'm glad that that little plot point was finally revealed.  

So many questions...will Kagome suffer from guilt about the event? How is it the merprince doesn't hate her for it even if she was just being manipulated? Will the merpeople forgive her?  And.....what does the merprince look like???  Does Kagome like what she sees?  So many questions....

Can't wait until next update.


Eliona (Chapter 25) - Mon 11 Mar 2013

My GAWD! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER <3 *bows and grovels at your feet* update soon please XD


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