I am in LOVE with this story!!!!! Can't wait to read more :) Hope Sesshy isn't too hard on Kags lol
poor kagome she just cant seem to get a break. bankotsu should have put some kind of illusion spell on the bracelets the strippers had to wear so none of the people that congregated the strip club could recognize the girls when they were in the outside world. but other then that please keep the chapters coming.
Nice, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Shaneka (Chapter 12) - Sat 28 Dec 2013
Great chapter ,looking forward to the next update.
yey. . . finally they meet again! XD. . hmm, so what will happen next?
Ankita (Chapter 12) - Mon 23 Dec 2013
<3 lovelyyy chapter excited about the next oneee... Please please update soonnn
Thank youuuu ^_^
So they have finally met again, and Kagome know where she has seen him before. Now he just needs to remember where he has seen her before and they will be even :D I hope Rin and Souta get better soon though, it is so sad when children are sick :C
Such a nice, full chapter :) LOVED it! I like that Kagome knows before Sesshoumaru...question is, will she be embarrassed oand try to hide her job...or will she act indifferent to her situation. Kagome can go either way as she has been played as both the shy, ashamed and the strong character. I'm interested to see where this goes! Great work- keep it up!
i hope they will meet soon in the hospital . . ow~
Shaneka (Chapter 11) - Wed 16 Oct 2013
Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next update.
Come it, keep it coming.
I'm enjoying this story! I haven't had a chance to catch up in a while, so keep up the great work! I love how Sesshoumaru was goaded into a lapdance haha
Loving it, keep it coming.
Loveyaa (Chapter 10) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Quite enjoyed your two cents at the end, the power of a lap dance. Hahaha. Thinggetting leash getting steamy between them, they are off to a running start. I wonder how you will get them back together though. And if Sesshoumaru can admit to actually liking a stripper enough before he sees her again at the hoapital. I eagerly await the next dance. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Oh no!! It can't stop there!! I was so absorbed! I have never read a story like this; the idea of Kagome stripping to pay for her brother's treatment is fafetched but still strangely like her, as we know she would do anything for her family. And poor Sesshy...he underestimated that lap dance...hehehe that was priceless...the fact that he met Kagome at the hospital will make it all the sweeter when they both realize it...I can't wait! Very well written and equally enticing. Please update soon!! ^_^
I'll admit that at first I wasn't sold on the whole stripper story. But by around chapter 5 or so I warmed up to it. You've done a great job with all of their individual stories and developing the friendships and relationships between the different characters as well (: I'm learning new things about strippers too, unless this is all in a creative sense. I just wish there were much more than 9 chapters at this point! I'm eager to learn about how it will progress and whatnot, and this chapter left me at a total cliffhanger.
There was one thing I'd like to point out though that totally threw me off. In chapter 7 with that first bit where Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha were bickering as usual and Touga enters the scene as well, if I'm not mistaken I'm pretty sure that Inuyasha mentions towards the end that Sesshoumaru's ex-wife, Kagura, died right? So I was like "what the hell?" when I see in chapter 9 that she is obviously alive and well and a stripper at Shikon as well?? Unless I missed something and that there are two different Kaguras in your story.
But besides that I enjoy the story so far. Please continue at your own steady pace, I've always liked the fanfictions you've written - and well written they all are!
- Vivi
Keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 9) - Fri 30 Aug 2013
this a real good story thanks.
Ket (Chapter 8) - Mon 29 Jul 2013
This is a really interesting story so far, but I'm starting to wonder when or how will Sesshoumaru come into the picture.
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