Reviews for Hypocrite by BelovedStranger

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Fri 09 Aug 2013

Cool, keep it coming.

snowbird (Chapter 7) - Sun 04 Aug 2013

I love the plot of this story.  But PLEASE get her out of that stupid short skirt!  The anime writers had to have had a brain fart to dress her like that in the past.  She does not blend in and shows more skin than the whores of that time.  She was worried about the wind blowing up her skirt to show her panties.  Well, duh!!  Sorry but I absolutely hate that uniform.


I'm eager to see them slowly grow close and for her to rid herself of her stupid childish feelings for Inuyasha.

mari (Chapter 7) - Sun 04 Aug 2013

loving this story thanks.

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Sat 03 Aug 2013

Keep it coming.

Starfyre (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 May 2013

Great chapter! I love that you don't have him trying to suddenly be all best friends forever with InuYasha.

It always throws me when they are suddenly like nothing ever happened without any real explanation on how they came to be real actual loving brothers.

I like that he's trying to keep some of who he used to be before she ripped his eyelids off and forced him to face reality. The hardest thing to do is change yourself. No matter how much you want to change it's a constant battle not to fall into old habits and behaviors or worse thought patterns. I think you are doing an excellent job with this.

I look forward to more! Hopefully soonerish. (yes I know that's not really a real word)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 May 2013

Great story, keep it coming.

KEdakumi (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 May 2013

Such a good story.  So much feeling.  Can't wait for more!

NicoRavenPen (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 May 2013

~~Ooooo just found this fic and I am in LOVE with it! XD So fantastically done! I have never read a fic where Sessh was realistically effected like this! Fantastic job! :D

Moonlight Silk (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 May 2013

I am up to chapter three and this is fantastic. Just great!

Starfyre (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Mar 2013

I just started reading this story, and I have to say, it's completely awesome. You are doing an amazingly good job with the characters. The plot line is excellent, and the flow smooth and mesmerizing. This is so beautifully written, and worded that I find myself completely lost in the story. Great job. I look forward to your next update.


Sandra Barreto (Chapter 4) - Sat 16 Feb 2013

OMG! OMMDG! Iloved this chapter!

I never, in any of the many fics of this pairing I saw Sesshoumaru portrayed this way, never! And I loved it so much,, but at the same time my heart broke for him too, ya know? Cause his person is based on his morals and honor that put him above everyone, human and demons, and to him see that... that he is no better than anyone was a chock, a punch in his face that really brought him down, emotionally, so now I really want to read how the "moving on" process of this it is going to be, so I am curios and very very happy to had found this fic (:

KEdakumi (Chapter 4) - Sat 16 Feb 2013

Such a good chapter.  The actions spoke so loud.  Can't wait for more.

Stella Mira (Chapter 3) - Wed 30 Jan 2013

Well, he deserved the wake up call! Finally, she managed to knock some sense into his stubborn head. Truthfully, I believe he is really angry at his father not Inuyasha or Izayoi. When it comes down to it, his father chose to leave and protect his younger son instead of staying with Sesshoumaru and his mother. I don't think he realizes that, but it's the true source of all this bitterness he harbors. He is a hypocrite who hides behind excuses and refuses to admit that he loved his father and was simply broken when he died.

Amazing chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next one ^^

nicole (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Jan 2013

Kristina (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Jan 2013

WOW totally loving this story!!! I must say I really enjoy stories where Kagome is mature and has a wisdom about her. I can't wait to see where you go with your story. I look forward to each new chapter!! Thank you for sharing your story


Sandra Barreto (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Jan 2013

perfect, serious!

your style of writing it's very good, the kind of one that I really love to read so give me more to read because I loving :D:D

Stella Mira (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Jan 2013

Oh, girl this is excellent! I love your portrayal of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru here. She's the light to his darkness in this fic. He should reflect on his words and actions because they are indeed contradicting.

Loved both chapters.! Can't wait for the next one ^^

Sess Koibito (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Jan 2013

Great chapter! Sesshoumaru can be quite a jerk at times! I love when Kagome tells him like it is! Update again soon!

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