Interesting, keep it coming.

 What Makes A Dad

 God took the strength of a mountain,  The majesty of a tree,  The warmth of a summer run,  The calm of a quiet sea,  The generous soul of nature,  The comforting arm of night,  The wisdom of the ages,  The power of the eagle's flight,  The joy of a morning in spring,  The faith of a mustard seed,  The patience of eternity,  The depth of a family need,  Then God combined these qualities,  When there was nothing more to add,  He knew His masterpiece was complete,  And so, He called it...Dad.

 Happy Belated Father's Day!

 FATHERS

 Father's are the strength of the family,  To bond us and hold us together.

 Always there to mediate the household,  A determined mentor we look to lead altogether.

 He's the bodyguard that protects us,  And give us comfort from all harm.

 He constantly offers compassion,  Always offering up his arm.

 To stand behind us endlessly,  Though at times in darkness we tend to fall.

 He always their to guide us to the light,  For us to follow from his call.

 With years to come, day by day,  We grow from the nest we grew.

 In hope to become something great,  For I hope to someday be like you.

 A Father's love is never ending,  Always there with a heart of pure gold.

 I love you Dad forever,  I know you'll always be my stronghold.

 Happy Belated Father's Day!

Great, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

really liking it thanks for the quick updates.

This story is awesome. The setting that you created is really interesting. seems like it's a bit scifi which is really cool. cant wait to read more. Thanks!!!

great update thanks.

This is a great story so far and I can't wait to read more. <3

So late, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

so far so good thanks.

This seems different and I would love to see what happens

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

I would have to say that I am intrigued. I do hope you continue this story. Looking forward to your next update.