Well... ever her minds said, 'she taken advantage of the patient Sesshoumaru', my mind said other thing..
He IS her mate. Her HUSBAND in human term. He MUST be the one she come to... He MUST be the one she rely onto... He MUST be the one who'll heal her and give the cure.. He MUST be her world.. And that isn't 'taking advantage', that is the 'rights'. It is her rights to take comforts in her mate, and it is his rights and his duty to comply it...
......and I will loose my eyes if it's Moriyasu... (that she came to)
Okay, I'm back for the 'real' review!
*after being trasfused with 2 bottle full of blood*
Free falling from Eiffel Tower (or Tokyo Tower? Which one is the best?) for this chapter! Then floored on the floor till it dent deeper than Inuyasha's 'Osuwari' hole...!! My mind furiously screaming 'Kya Kya Kya!' everytime I reread this chapter... THEY FINALLY TOGETHER!! well, not final 'finally' but at least they deeper the bond! Although I still little bewildered at why he didn't kiss her lips, and you didn't said anything about he 'came' inside or outside either..
Well... she wasn't drink some potion like in 'Chain of Love' that made her pregnant in one go, but I didn't loose hope you'll do this kind of plot again... mostly because I think a pregnancy and a child could be a 'tool' to deeper the bond and cure her broken and empty-feel heart, not mention that maybe his demon seeds have more power to overpowering her more fragile human egg (I don't believe what I saiiiiid!!! ^//////^)...
With your, '...Kagome gave no consideration to consequences. She was too caught up in the now, unable to think of anything but the numbness she wanted to escape.....' was like a green bulb appears in my head that 'something' will happen after this.. Well, maybe I was overthinking, maybe your version of 'consequences' is for their too moving forward relationship, but we the readers could have some hope and imagination, could we?
I love if they'll have kids soon! I think Kagome has another scar in her heart because her childless state.. But, well... as you said in one of your feedbacks, something like 'there are still so much to do and to cure before the kids come', of course your the genius author, Chie-san! Whatever story you'll pull out, I'll glady read it, review it and hoping my review and my feedbacks won't bothering you a bit!
How many times I said it, I will gladly say it again! I love your (interpretation of) Sesshoumaru!!! Kagome too! She matured beautifully in your story!
I really like the dialog between them in this story, so awesome as always! ^_^
Maybe KAgome was a bit selfish but when someone loses their half of their soul, they tend to be a little selfish. As long as she realizes she is being selfish and stop before she crosses a line, I think Sesshomaru is fine with her taking "advantage". She does need time to heal and loneliness can cause her to backslide. I think she is more than strong enough to be standing next to Sesshomaru and to also lead with him.
Saiya (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Dec 2015
Wow
Ankita (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Dec 2015
Yayyyy loved this chapter finally they are conversing properly ^_^ please updateeee sooonnn
Blommie8 (Chapter 14) - Wed 16 Dec 2015
Didie (Chapter 14) - Wed 16 Dec 2015
Kyaaaaaaaa.....!!!!! Oh My God, Oh My God, OH MY GOD!!!
When you said 'they would be touching in the next chapter' I didn't expect it to be...to be... like THAT! Not in the slingest bit!
*fainted with bloodied nose*
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*wake up for a second because of the forgotten words*
Give me! Give me that....your (version of) Sesshoumaru! Give meeeeee~~~~~ onegaiiiii~~~~
*fainted again because of the blood lost*
You know I love this mother.
Great and interest in chapter.
A wonderful chapter.
Poor Kagome! She still suffers for Inuyasha's death! But I understand, have to be difficult lose someone you love.
Loveyaa (Chapter 13) - Mon 02 Nov 2015
You have such a way with writing everybody's emotions. I feel like you have captured her sorrow and grief quite elegantly. I wonder what will help Kagome get through this, or if it will be a lot of little things. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Sesshoumaru handles it :)
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