*smiles* This is a wonderful chapter. The depth of emotion you get across is amazing.
Rin, a bad guy?! oooohhhhh, didn't think of that one. I'm interested to see how you play with that idea.
I wish you a most blessed day.

I enjoyed this chapter very much!  I can't wait to see how the three plans of Florin, Nori and her father will collide in the world of our favorite couple!  They finally reach a tentative understanding of each other and a comet (or three) is heading right at them!  Will they survive?  I'm staying tuned!

One of the things I like most about this story is the way you delve into the psychological motivations of ALL of the characters, not just Kagome or Sesshomaru.  In my reading or in real life, I'm always asking myself "why".  Why do people act the strange and varied ways they do.  I think out of all the fanfic authors, you link these motivations with the actions of the characters, as opposed to just having some characters portrayed as "good" and others as "evil".  Keep up the great work.  I look forward to each update...

I love this story so much, I can't even tell you.  (I was reading it on FF.net).  Every chapter is great, and I'm really glad it's getting to be a nice, long story, with the potential for much more to happen.  Usually, the conflict in a "romance" type story feels manufactured to me, but in this case, it seems very genuine and heart-wrenching.  Kagome has every reason to doubt Sesshomaru and his family, the same reasons to doubt her ex-fiance and his family, and her own family is not the place to seek the solace she needs, either.  She really is in a bind.  And Sesshomaru is too.  The dynamics of his family explain why old males get overthrown by young ones in nature and naturally in human family units.  Please, keep it coming!

Love this chapter.  I hope you'll update again soon.  :)

I love how this story is progressing!  You always keep your characters so interesting and real in their responses.  You have a very gift for dialogue!  I can hardly wait to see what happens next...  

mmhmm.. This was a very pleasant chapter to read.

I enjoy how you portray Sesshoumaru. He is noble and strong. You keep him as he should be kept. I mourn for Kagome's circumstances, though I am most pleased to see that she is slowly but surely starting to come around. Many times, I read stories that drag out her unhappiness and denial of a chance of happiness. I am very happy to see that that is not the case with this story here.

Thank you very much for sharing this story with me and others. I look forward to more from you.

-Tuanh

Oh yes, I did enjoy this chapter a lot, just like any other thing you wrote XD But what to say? I'm afraid I might fall into the vile trap of repetition... but anyway, know that you have my undivided and sincere support, and not to forget unlimited gratitude, for the nice trip you share with us, lowly readers XD

Dewa mata

This is great.  You have a wonderful hand with the "Dun dun dun!" moments.  Example When Liam's twin speaks to the youkai that attacked Kagome in the bathroom.  Like oooh what's gonna happen next.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  Thanks!

Great story!

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