*smiles* This is a wonderful chapter. The depth of emotion you get across is amazing.
Rin, a bad guy?! oooohhhhh, didn't think of that one. I'm interested to see how you play with that idea.
I wish you a most blessed day.
Possessed (Chapter 12) - Wed 14 Jan 2009
I enjoyed this chapter very much! I can't wait to see how the three plans of Florin, Nori and her father will collide in the world of our favorite couple! They finally reach a tentative understanding of each other and a comet (or three) is heading right at them! Will they survive? I'm staying tuned!
One of the things I like most about this story is the way you delve into the psychological motivations of ALL of the characters, not just Kagome or Sesshomaru. In my reading or in real life, I'm always asking myself "why". Why do people act the strange and varied ways they do. I think out of all the fanfic authors, you link these motivations with the actions of the characters, as opposed to just having some characters portrayed as "good" and others as "evil". Keep up the great work. I look forward to each update...
| I love the little details that you're putting in. It makes the story that much better. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please, please, update soon:)
Anamika (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Dec 2008
| Its strange (though not very much after reading many sess-kag fics) seeing him so passionate about something. Though passionate is not the right word but still. And I hope you have loads to add into the fic, cause it just got riled up. Update soon...
I love this story so much, I can't even tell you. (I was reading it on FF.net). Every chapter is great, and I'm really glad it's getting to be a nice, long story, with the potential for much more to happen. Usually, the conflict in a "romance" type story feels manufactured to me, but in this case, it seems very genuine and heart-wrenching. Kagome has every reason to doubt Sesshomaru and his family, the same reasons to doubt her ex-fiance and his family, and her own family is not the place to seek the solace she needs, either. She really is in a bind. And Sesshomaru is too. The dynamics of his family explain why old males get overthrown by young ones in nature and naturally in human family units. Please, keep it coming!
Vicky (Chapter 11) - Sat 20 Dec 2008
Love this chapter. I hope you'll update again soon. :)
Possessed (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Dec 2008
I love how this story is progressing! You always keep your characters so interesting and real in their responses. You have a very gift for dialogue! I can hardly wait to see what happens next...
mmhmm.. This was a very pleasant chapter to read.
I enjoy how you portray Sesshoumaru. He is noble and strong. You keep him as he should be kept. I mourn for Kagome's circumstances, though I am most pleased to see that she is slowly but surely starting to come around. Many times, I read stories that drag out her unhappiness and denial of a chance of happiness. I am very happy to see that that is not the case with this story here.
Thank you very much for sharing this story with me and others. I look forward to more from you.
-Tuanh
| Wow I love this story so much. I know a story is good when I can get emotional reading it. And let me tell you this story really make me go on an emotional roller coaster. I get angry with Kagome for being stubborn, but at the same time sad that she's still mourning for her lost love. I feel sympathy for Sess for realizing that he wants her and nervous that he may not be able to convince her. and so many other that i can't even discribe. le sigh. Please update soon.
Maybe he should suggest that they try to start from the beginning and maybe try to take her on a date, something simple to start to allow her to really get to know him. But whatever you do with this story i'm sure will be fantastic.
| Wow...I found myself wanting to cry for Kagome with all the confusion going on. Wonderful Job!
| Your cliffys always keep me hanging. I love it. I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work:)
| Hi! This story is progressing nicely:) Keeps getting better with each chapter. Good work:)
Oh yes, I did enjoy this chapter a lot, just like any other thing you wrote XD But what to say? I'm afraid I might fall into the vile trap of repetition... but anyway, know that you have my undivided and sincere support, and not to forget unlimited gratitude, for the nice trip you share with us, lowly readers XD
Dewa mata
Jen! (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Nov 2008
This is great. You have a wonderful hand with the "Dun dun dun!" moments. Example When Liam's twin speaks to the youkai that attacked Kagome in the bathroom. Like oooh what's gonna happen next. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2008
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