such a good chapter, love the way you handled the atraction with the children present.
Awesome job.
I look forward to seeing where this goes, and how quickly, or slowly, it gets there ;D
~Starfyre
Thank you for updating! A simply wonderful chapter!
Happy Birthday To Me, Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
TKE (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Feb 2013
I'm soooo enjoying this!!!!
UPDATE FASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it coming.
love every chapter as they just keep getting better.
This is so sweet, I love it already! I can't wait to get my daily dose of chocolately fluff
2 cute for words
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
very cute chapter. it would be great if you developed it into a story.
HÆĐĒS (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jan 2013
Hot damn yes! =~= This was amazing, I love it as as a oneshot but i'm curious to see what would happen if it goes anywhere =~= I have a suggestion not sure you want it but if you continue it maybe you can have Kagome come to the park more often and have drabbles of her in the park probably waiting and wanting to see sesshomaru and his children~ =~= but its also nice as a oneshot because how cute it is =~= "tiny cookie thieves" lol I really like how you potrayed Kagome she sounded like a Kagome i'd like, very mischevious in a way when she understood the kids like she was a child only much more mature and very kind it warmed my heart so much. And i love how Sesshomaru was potrayed to much more sleek, seductive than aloof something I like as well. I also liked how you gave him short locks black hair it kinda made me feel that it was kinda something I would see, you know? Great amazing story I do hope you would make more of this amazing stuff and Kagomeis right it is a dangerous sight for all women~ love it~
I have to agree with you, seeing a man with small children, caring for them, enjoying their company, is so cute and desireable in a man. Sadly I don't see very many doting fathers.
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