Oh my, I remember reading the beginning of this ,but was unable to review because I was using my daughter's phone to read while she went into a store. She taught me how to get onto the web and to access Dokuga from her bookmarks but my finger seems to always hit the wrong place so I just read.
I adore this story very much. It's the first time I've read where Sessh has 2 children and one isn't named Rin. Don't get me wrong, I love Rin to pieces but this is a nice change of pace. From the first time they met, I too, could feel their attraction without Kagome's thoughts on the matter.
You have definitely another fan in me. I have to applaud your talent for writing and your muse for storytelling. As long as you continue to keep writing such amazing fics, I will be here to read them. JEN
Oh, he's sooo wicked in all the right ways!
Loved the new chapter!
I would feel sorry for Kagome if I wasn't so very very jealousy of her. LMFAO
I look forward to more, especially since I don't imagine him allowing her to escape his clutches untouched... hehehehe.
~Starfyre
OMG!! I have to say Rich melted chocolate that's how I think Sesshoumaru sounds. The descriptive quality of your writing is excellent in this story! Absolutely sweet and sinful everything that makes up the perfect treat!!! Love it!!
Yaaaay date night is here!
Kagome! Snap out of it! Seduce hiiiiim :P and take him to bedddddddd!! Before I do. >=3
Keep updating!
xoxo
I am sitting here smiling like an idiot. This chapter made me so happy, I cannot even describe it. Thank you for your wonderful imagery of Sesshoumaru's voice- I know exactly what it sounds like without even hearing it. You have a gorgeous writing style and I highly enjoy your flustered Kagome! Please continue soon :D
2 tumbs up!!! great chapter!!!!
Keep it coming.
JouJous (Chapter 8) - Thu 25 Apr 2013
More! Please write more! *-*
SMOLDERING HOT SEDUCTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAWT HAWT HAWT HAWT HAWT HAWT HAWT!!!!!!!!!! I need to dunk myself in Northpole if you keep this up.....*steaming* TwT
Wonderful and sweet- I felt tingles all the way down to my toes! You have a talent for writing about lust and desire in a very... innocently sensual manner; which is great and something I wish I could do!
Nice use of the prompt too!
Woot! A childless date!
*fans self*
seriously your imagery in this chapter had my imagination running on premium!
lol
I honestly can't blame everything on lack of sleep.
She's being more clear headed than me, I so would have gone for his place, lol.
that I blame on lack of sleep. hehehehe
Great update!
~Starfyre
~~Gaw!! XD Usually when people try to portray Sesshy as smiling and/or laughing they fail to make it still seem like him, but you do SUCH a fantastic job of that, woman! XD Oh my goodness, a girl could melt...
TKE (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 Apr 2013
Oh yes!!!
This story is just so adorably cute and sexy! Lol you have to be quite talanted to pull that off :-)!
Oh, I am liking where this is going. More steamy looks and sultry voices please!
This had to be the sexiest chapter ever. The way you describe Sesshomaru's voice just UGH....Anyway please update soon =D
Omg he kissed her hand! A guy did that once to me and let me tell you it about made me melt! Chilvalry is not a waste of time! It's romantic and causes a girl to feel so special and wanted! And now they are going on a date! Progress! lol
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