What is it with your dialogue timing??? They make me feel gooey. Emotional development between the characters also flow so beautifully, not forced at all.
If you could have a proper editing done, the final work would be exquisite.
Dear maria, I eagerly await all future chapters for this story, The mischievous lady and the Bridges of Paradise. May your muse remain ever faithful to you.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
"Yes, love?" Awww!!! That right there caused me an embarrassing fangirl squeal moment lol The subway....hmm,...Sess would def have a hird time riding that lool
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Awwww he's so sweet and cute!! Damn, I don't know how Kagome hasn't fallen madly in love with him yet with all the things he says to her! They MUST reconcile sooooooooon!!!
Oh no Sesshomaru and Naraku in the future, it's bad that Naraku when through too, I wonder where did he go! Keep it coming.
Nicole (Chapter 7) - Mon 18 Feb 2013
Is there gonna be another chapter?
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Awww that was sooo incredibly sweet as a gesture!!! How can a woman not fall for a man like that?? I can't blame Kagome...
Thank you for participating in my challenge, Maria! I really hope to see more of your chapters in the future! Keep up the great work ^^
Keep it coming.
Cara (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 Feb 2013
| That dirty dog! Cake or no cake, she should ignore him. Go get his mate to smile for him. Poor kagome.
Selena (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 Feb 2013
Poor Kagome =(
Selena (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Jan 2013
Oh shit... who the hell is that demoness?! I'll kill herrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Selena (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Jan 2013
Sweet! This is so sweet!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
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