next chapter please

I want to know moooooooooooooore

I am a bit confused on how Sesshomaru would take Kagome away from Inu.
And obviously since Kagome was with Inu, does this mean that Sesshomaru would rape Kagome once she is his? or would he wait for her to want him too?

Keep it coming.

Where does chp 5 fit because it doesn't seem to follow chp 4. It almost sounds like a longer version of chp 1

next chapter please

Wow! Nice start. There are a few errors but a quick review of the writing with a spell checker and/or yourself should correct those. Nothing truly major, just within being seperated with a space, and the misspelling bastered. Over all, looks good. I'm totally hooked.

~Starfyre

Keep it coming.

thank you the other 2 chapters and keep them coming.

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

too short chappies plz giv bigger 1ns :(

I like this story so far, please continue it.

Please continue!! You're doing so well and I hope to read more. It's something I haven't read yet, this idea, and I'm glad I clicked on this. I support you and can't wait for updates. I'll be waiting!!! <3 GOOD LUCK!!!!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

sounds interesting keep going