WOw!! That is quite the comeback chapter. I like that they are not all lovey dovey, even if their instincts and all that may be trying to get them to be. The fact that a chance has been given...I wonder where this will lead them and how things will change. I can't wait to see what happens next and the fact that they have to adjust before they can take on Naraku. Til next time with the fallout of the Kami's interference and possibly a wedding :)

AWWWW.......at least she's willing to try. I hope it's soon!

awe i love this! kagome is finally bending! though i love that it's sess that does it first, and that papa's a twinkie fiend!

I just read this whole story which was great,,,,but it's not done. Please tell me you are going to continue. I really enjoyed it & I'll be waiting for more soon hopefully.

You had me hitting my pillow in frustration!  Update soon!!  <_<  That sounds SO wrong.  xD

Hello Zyren,

so playing with the dog, huh? Had a very good laugh at that to be absolutely honest. I have to admit that i like your original Character Andres, he is very entertaining. I have gone through the whole story in one day what is a rarity for me and complements the author's skill on keeping me hooked so far that the hour might have turned to 2Am, yet, I am sitting here and writing this review to let you know how much I did enjoy it and that I can only hope this story will find continuation. I do understand how life is so no pushing, it was meant in general. Now, sorry if you find any tipos, it is the middle of the night and I am on my netbook....as much as i love this thing, I need to get my big PC....just moved, so I am saying 

Ja Mata

Angel

(angel_fighter_1@yahoo.de)

please start writing and updating soon I want to find out what happens

I just read every chapter, start to finish, and I must say, that this is an AMAZING story.  Your writing style is very precise and clear, and you get the emotions conveyed perfectly.

Oddly, I like this version of Kagome.  I'm usually one who gravitates towards the 'damsel in distress' Kagome, but this version is refreshing, and I LOVE IT!

I also love Andres!  He is an awesome OC!

Keep up the good work! I look forward to your next update!  *favorites!*

~Sakuramaru~

IM wondering how this will turn out. You've def opened up a world of possiblites for yourself and I can't wait to see which avenue you decide to take maybe throw in some hair pin turns and a twist of fate. Since the characters are so much darker everbody's kinda left guessing. I also want to really thank you for dedicating the chapter to me and a few others. It really meant a lot to me :)

Chp 16.... Well that's so fricken retarded. She wnted a clean slate but she starts fights? Kagome is so f-ing stupid. Cool! But so utterly stupid. And Andres is hot, my favorite character by far.

I have been following this fic from the first time you posted. I have to say you have done fantastic work with this fic and have had the reader go from one emotion to a total different emotion. Very well done.

His mouth curved into a smile as he thought of the potential.

“Now that’s just creepy.” Inuyasha whispered to his father.

“Yes, it most certainly is.” <----- hahahahahaha ♥

this was an interesting update. I kidna hope kagome gets her happy ever after, and she doesnt hafta wait for another life time to get it, that'd be kinda sad :[

*hugs on you* I missed you!!! I'm still enjoying the story and I'm impressed. 2 updates! In a month! The storyline is progressing wonderfully and I'm looking forward to what you have planned for the newly happily... ok not happily mated couple. Hopefully they don't kill each other. Though it does seem that Sesshoumaru seems to like her a bit more with every update while she's still despising his guts. Anyway, I hope life has been treating you well.

that so sad! *makes sad face at you* *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you* fixit!

whoa. this is such an amazing story i have followed it for AGES!! please keep going!

please to be updating!!

A lot happened in this chapter without a lot happening in this chapter. I like that you explained things to us while still moving the story forward. I can't wait to see what happens now and how the dynamic duo is going to handle things from here on out. I wonder if things really will get better and how much longer til all is right in the world. Apperantly this hasn't worked out before and I can't wait for you to have the "people" now do all they can to change that. Im on the edge of my seat until next time after lots has changed :)

i always liked how dark this fic was

Can I just say intense. I have been reading your story and I quite enjoy the compulsion you have infused in it. I just want to keep going. I more or less want to turn the page and find out more. There have been so many ups and downs and twists and turns. Now the big bad battle is coming up and I am so pumped. I hope that Kagome gets some form of a happy ending. I am quite impressed with the emotion that you instilled in all the characters and how it so easily comes across. The characters are all over the place but it is still easy to follow them. I look foward to the end of all things that go bump in the night :)

DAMN!!!! short short chapter!!!! :'( im craving for more!!! please, gimme more!!!!!! :) i seriously love ur story :D